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SleepyPuppy
2009-12-20 . chapter 6
lol sai pounting never would of have guess his maniputaive side thanks for upl look foward to the next ch
Darkness Realm
2009-12-07 . chapter 6
Just wondering if you're going to continue this story since it's been 2 years since you last updated?? I just want to know since the story is still in the begining it didn't even start on the good part yet... I was really excited on the AkiraxHikaruXSai part ^_^ anyways it's an interesting begining I really hope you'll continue it...
Bom hasamaki
2009-10-30 . chapter 2
Oh..I wonder just what kind of reputation Sai had? ;P Teehee.

Hope you don't give up! :D We're all rooting for you!
morbiDreamscape
2009-10-17 . chapter 6
Hi! I love this story... (sorry for the incoherency, but this story has all the elements I wanted to read/write after I watched Hikaru no Go, but was too lazy to do). I hope you update more than once every few years (even though I'm completely the same kind of person -cough-), and I look forward to both Sai's evilness (not much of a stretch to imagine that!) and lots of citrusy goodness! :D Thanks for writing!
Haruhi.Hime
2009-09-17 . chapter 6
haha i so would not mind if u changed the rating to M! lol plz update soon!!
Hitokiri Dark Empress
2009-09-01 . chapter 6
Oh please update! It's been over 2 years since a new chapter came up. There's not enough Sai/Hikaru fics out here! Oh the games Sai would play! A match between Ogata and Sai? Touya-Meijin vs Sai? Sai playing shido-go against Akira again? Pretty please update!
dizzy
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
i just read...good luck?...really...GOOD LUCK WAITING FOR AN UPDATE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

dude! ! ! just throw some ideas out at as, PLEASE! ! ! ! ! ! give us something to imagine. throw us some plot developments and we'll tell you where we want you to take it if you haven't the will to decide for yourself! then you can do the literary elaborations and then just upload whatever kinda quilted jigsaw up and we'll just take THAT! just what is the reason for you to be so much more enthused to update your other fics and have such dead feelings towards this one? is it 'cause the others are continuing manga series and hikago's already ended? that you've got nothing new to fire yourself up with? that you're possibly BORED? with the characters?! how could you?!?!?! when does sai finally enter the pro world exactly?!?!?!?!?! when do those foreigners finally reappear?!?!?!?! (like that full-of-himself pretty boy butt-face korean boy) when're you gonna write them in?! when does hikaru finally get to smash akira's "darling" feelings in the ground and trod, trample, grind, pound, and pulverate the last of akira's hopes at having his feelings reciprocated into the ground. (and of course you're gonna have to make that nice and slow so the pain's drawn out as long as possible for our sweet little akira, we wouldn't want you depriving him of even one drop of bitter reality, anguish, torment, and heartbreak now would we...you know that's the least you can do after making us wait so long) and you know what, my eyebrow's been raised so high after seeing you haven't updated each time i check that the only way for it to raise higher is if i ripped it off and shot it into space in a rocket. i really hope that someday soon (very very very very very soon...hopefully...+and be weary that my menacing glare doesn't pierce through this review and shoot you in the eye, poisoning it so that it'll swell up with puss infested warts and pop out of your eye still attached to whatever that specific nerve thingy connecting it to your brain is called, and you'll be able to see it rot right before your other good eye, watch as all the fluids drip drop out of that festering, dangling ball, and then finally wither into a blackish purplish raisin-y thing oscillating from your bloody socket+) you'll be able to sooth this raised eyebrow of mine with a nicely uploaded new chapter of this fic...or the devil as my witness, the next time you hear a knock on the door, you better take a peek to make sure it isn't some crazed reader armed with a hatchet, ready to chop that door down even if you don't open it...and then...who knows what else such reader would do after the door has thus fallen...
dizzy
2009-08-17 . chapter 5
hikaru - please!! give me more sai!
sai - i want to taste more hikaru!
hikaru - it's not fair, i wanna get the chance to be on top of sai! and i mean i wanna be the one sticking it in!
sai - no! i am the perpetual top! and i will lick hikaru's lollipop!

won't you grant sai and hikaru's dream to have a nice steamy bed scene (or it doesn't have to be a bed, it could be the floor, a table, the couch, in the bushes, whatever you want for goodness sake!), and maybe in adition, advance the plot a bit more too? where has this story gone? you neglect them too long and they'll abandon you! is that really what you want?! give us some more words will you?! are you seriously telling me you haven't written enough for even half a chapter in these 2+ years?! whatever you have, just upload it, please! and even if it sucks, since all your readers have become so deprived after these 2+ years, i'm sure we'll accept just about anything as genius at this point (maybe that's what you've been planning this whole time, just get us to go into withdrawal and then feed us cheap ** and we'll just bounce up and have a brief skyscraper high, crash down even lower than before and just become more and more avid junkies of your fic). why do this to us. have we been such ungreatful readers that you have to forsake us like this. what do we have to do to reassure you of our devotion?!

DAMN YOU! DAMN YOU TO THE DEEPEST REGIONS OF HELL! BURN IN THE ABYSS THAT IS BEELZEBUB'S LAIR! (i don't actually know where beelzebub lives, so sorry if i point you in the wrong direction) BUT EITHER WAY! THE GHOULS OF THE AFTERLIFE WILL HUNT YOU DOWN, HACK YOU TO PIECES, AND CARRY YOU TO THE ALTER OF THEIR KING WHERE HE WILL ROAST YOUR GUTS INTO CHEWY MIDNIGHT SNACKS, FILLET AND MARINATE YOUR LEAN PARTS IN A NICE, RICH BLOOD BASED SAUCE, SHISHKABOB YOUR EYES, EARS, AND TONGUE, THEN THROW YOUR BONES TO CERBERUS AS A TREAT!

so pwease, pwease, pwease update son! <3<3<3<3<3
dizzy
2009-08-17 . chapter 6
sai grew ever certain with each rhythmic breath hikaru released that the latter was asleep, temptation rising with each whiff he took of hikaru's sweet scent. ultimately, desire guided his hand down the boy's body, slipping under the elastic of hikaru's sweatpants, and, with his elegant fingers, traced the warm flesh down below. he wrapped his other arm more tightly around hikaru's torso, feeling hikaru's heartbeat in his palm, so grateful to have this skin on skin sensation. he called hikaru's name in a breathy voice, proceeding to lick the curve of hikaru's ear, then tracing from hikaru's earlobe, along his jaw, and reaching his destination, brushed a kiss along the corner of hikaru's mouth. the only thing in sai's mind was the fact that hikaru was in his arms. he shut his eyes, giving into his senses. feeling hikaru's hair and skin on his cheek. sai licked the side of hikaru's neck, having a need to indulge all senses with hikaru. with the rising body temperatures, hikaru's skin had started to dampen with sweat, giving it a slightly salty taste which only succeeded in enticing sai to become bolder. in an effort to feed on that taste, sai sucked an nibbled along hikaru's neck, and with each kiss and lick came a gentle rub and stroke along hikaru's bulge as it became increasingly obvious that hikaru would be having a restless sleep as his body succumbed to the hot stimulation. sai felt the heat rising between his legs, straining and pressing his southerly extremity against hikaru's leg...
prettychinese15
2009-08-14 . chapter 6
KYA!! I luv this story so much! Please update sooner. I'm already a big fan of ur other story "The World was all Before Him" but this is just amazing! Once again, please update!
follw
2009-07-21 . chapter 6
i love the end of this chapter AND FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS YAOI, UPDATE!
follw
2009-07-21 . chapter 5
sai show his manliness . . . hot
follw
2009-07-21 . chapter 4
hm
follw
2009-07-21 . chapter 3
so.cute.
follw
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
<3
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