Brilliant poem, beautifully written :-)

OMG! This is really good! All I can say is WOW! I wonder if I could use this for a song. I think it would be great! Get back to me if you wouldn't mind! Thanks! :)

I like this. And I don't usually like poetry, so ten points for you.

WOW. that was AMAZINGLY cool and random Lolls...

Gosh, I love this!

very creative! ur meant to be a poet/author! I know it! Anyway...that poem was so TOTALLY WICKED DUDE!Sowy 4 dat outburst! Much luv!

:: Jasmine :: P

This one is so sweet, really it is. it potrays the love Suze feels for Jesse. I will just cry if they do not find a way to be together forever. I shall say again to keep on writing what you write.

Luv,

Cassandra

Also very deep.

Wow! man that is an excellent poem! I am in awe... speechless in wonder... (but not of course textless)

how long did you work on it?

sweet story you should consider making one about Paul for us Ps Fanatics

OMG THIS IS SO SWEET! I LUV IT! UR NOT CRAZEE UR AWESOME!

Dude, person, that was good. Good enough to drag me out of my "I don't read the poetry stuff" stupor.

Ohmigod! That was so sweet! yet so sad. I love this. You must write another one.

Oh.

Oh. Oh.

Oh.

Oh, oh, oh!

Wow.

Poor Suze.

You just have to feel bad for her sometimes. She finds the best guy in the ENTIRE world and she can't have him. Personally, though, I think she's going to have an early death. She, sadly enough, strikes me as somebody who ISN'T going to go of old age. Either she's going to live forever, or she's going to killed. IE, Murder. Poor thing. But it does get my brain thinking of more possible endings of Twilight. I don't know. Meg says it ends with everybody satisfied, but I don't think that's possible. I really don't.

But this poem, I have to hand it to you, Lolly. It's really nice; as you sad; in that bittersweet sort of way.

Well, I'll talk to you later.

Manda

P.S. Drop with the poetry and update Addicted. I miss it dearly. Flashlight is okay, but you're Jesse/Paul swap takes the cake. Or... milkshake?

Whatever. I'm odd. I know.

Aww that was sweet.

I usually don't really like poetry, but I like yours. Especially the funny ones, but you write the serious ones really well too.

Good stuff!