I agree with the review below me. This story is well thought out, and the plot really encompasses quite a bit. I hope to read a new chapter someday.

This is a great story. You have an excellent style of writing, and you have kept all of these characters "in-character", which is not always an easy thing to do. I noticed it's been a long time since you last updated -- I sincerely hope that you haven't given up on this story, because it really is wonderful and I'd really like to know what happens with these characters in the universe that you've created.

i think your story is rather interesting.

update soon ok

Wow kick butt girl keep up the good work :-)

So very intereting, do update soon.

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me liketh muchly.
and you do outted spy doujima quite well.

What will happen next? Will Michael and Doujima be able to find and rescue Nagira before anything happens to him? What will happen to Amon and Robin? Please post more as soon as possible.

Update soon ok

Nice story, though you *did* take a while to write the rest of it. I'm guessing Mrs. Smith is going to have a big role later on? Helping Amon and Robin escape and stuff?

...super teach'. Feh.

Loved the lot of it. Your characterization is very, very good, descriptions are well done, conversations, while not Meris Ann-level, are good...
No real complaints, except the time it takes you to write a new chapter ^_-

~Akuma-sama, the demon lord

Please keep writing!

this is interesting! keep writing!

^_^ *grins* Continue!

dats a nice story u got dere, update soon

Hi Plated! I love your Nagira, and you've got some good work here. I'm looking forward to seeing you flesh this out. ^^