Yay! Good job! I liked it!

-sniffle- So nice! AW MAN! I'm crying...-trembles- Poor Xel-kun!! Poor Fi-san

T_T By letting Xellos die in this, youève killed me despite the fact that it's well written and really good. ^^;

Very touching and fitting. That was very impressive, and ironically, fitting in a way.

a rather touching story...

Nice, and interesting. A good, sad read with a plot twist. n.n Corny, in some aspects, but I liked it anyway. Good job!