Nice story-thingie, w/e. It was really good and I thoroughly enjoyed myself!

its cool. i think that the stalker is elliot or some other police officer or he wouldnt compared himself to the "common criminal". and the girl is olivia proberbly. please write more so i can find out.

Great story! Please continue! This is so great! Please continue!

wow, you have some weird formatting thing goin on. It's kinda confusing to read...

Oh! I love it! Please continue writing - you're really talented!

lezzy.