 T3Ko 2009-11-01 . chapter 4Heheh. Nice one.
Thanks, |
 SilverHyourinmaru 2009-09-23 . chapter 4Ha! This stuff is halarious! Why you haven't updated in so long is way beyond me! Hope you decide to change your mind and come back to it sometime! Ja ne! |
 gambit 2009-04-07 . chapter 4 I was about to add to the general clamour ("write moar! plzz! |
 John 2009-01-08 . chapter 4 Your story is great, I would love to see you continue and I think the amount of reviews you have received should also count for something.
Please continue. |
 Danyman 2008-11-11 . chapter 4 If your still alave I beg you to update this story please it's to good to be wasted. |
 Darthme1011 2008-10-08 . chapter 4lol great is this died? or is their more coming or posted else wear? |
 Danyman 2008-08-24 . chapter 4 please update you can't give up this story |
 Meech Macko 2008-07-17 . chapter 4C'mon UPDATE THE STORY WHATS TAKIN U SO LONG.U GOT 206 REVIEWS ISNT THAT MORE THAN ENOUGH.SO DONT STOP |
 George Mathew 2008-07-06 . chapter 4 This is GREAT STORY So dont give up UPDATE SOON PLEASE.Then again make the story a bit more with LEMONS Certainly makes u wanna read more. |
 Wez168 2008-06-14 . chapter 3Nice chapter. |
 Wez168 2008-06-14 . chapter 3 Awesome story, very original and funny. Can't wait for further chapters. |
 kyugan 2008-05-06 . chapter 4Paddles should be involved next time the punishment is issued.
Have Keitaro's Aura grow so strong he can make dead trees blossom by touching them (Like Jonathan Joestar from JoJo).
Is this a Keitaro/Ayoyama sisters fic? Or Keitaro/Harem fic? If it is the latter, then please, for the love of Akamatsu-sensei's hands, DON'T INCLUDE NARUSEGAWA!
If you must include the shaved gorilla make her the last member. |
 njblackwolf 2008-04-13 . chapter 4MOAR! MOAR!
Woo!
Hahah, I liked it. Keep it up! I enjoy the different angle of the soul-searching trip. What i'd also enjoy is more chapters, haha!
UPDATE.
Please? |
 kidcrud 2008-02-27 . chapter 4nice come backe and up date |
 Ruto Kuntai 2008-01-07 . chapter 4Another well made chapter, thanks for the great work. Well created chapter, nicely written.
Thanks for the great work.
Ruto Kuntai |