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T3Ko
2009-11-01 . chapter 4
Heheh. Nice one.
Thanks,
SilverHyourinmaru
2009-09-23 . chapter 4
Ha! This stuff is halarious! Why you haven't updated in so long is way beyond me! Hope you decide to change your mind and come back to it sometime! Ja ne!
gambit
2009-04-07 . chapter 4
I was about to add to the general clamour ("write moar! plzz!
John
2009-01-08 . chapter 4
Your story is great, I would love to see you continue and I think the amount of reviews you have received should also count for something.

Please continue.
Danyman
2008-11-11 . chapter 4
If your still alave I beg you to update this story please it's to good to be wasted.
Darthme1011
2008-10-08 . chapter 4
lol great is this died? or is their more coming or posted else wear?
Danyman
2008-08-24 . chapter 4
please update you can't give up this story
Meech Macko
2008-07-17 . chapter 4
C'mon UPDATE THE STORY WHATS TAKIN U SO LONG.U GOT 206 REVIEWS ISNT THAT MORE THAN ENOUGH.SO DONT STOP
George Mathew
2008-07-06 . chapter 4
This is GREAT STORY So dont give up UPDATE SOON PLEASE.Then again make the story a bit more with LEMONS Certainly makes u wanna read more.
Wez168
2008-06-14 . chapter 3
Nice chapter.
Wez168
2008-06-14 . chapter 3
Awesome story, very original and funny. Can't wait for further chapters.
kyugan
2008-05-06 . chapter 4
Paddles should be involved next time the punishment is issued.

Have Keitaro's Aura grow so strong he can make dead trees blossom by touching them (Like Jonathan Joestar from JoJo).

Is this a Keitaro/Ayoyama sisters fic? Or Keitaro/Harem fic? If it is the latter, then please, for the love of Akamatsu-sensei's hands, DON'T INCLUDE NARUSEGAWA!

If you must include the shaved gorilla make her the last member.
njblackwolf
2008-04-13 . chapter 4
MOAR! MOAR!
Woo!

Hahah, I liked it. Keep it up! I enjoy the different angle of the soul-searching trip. What i'd also enjoy is more chapters, haha!

UPDATE.
Please?
kidcrud
2008-02-27 . chapter 4
nice come backe and up date
Ruto Kuntai
2008-01-07 . chapter 4
Another well made chapter, thanks for the great work. Well created chapter, nicely written.

Thanks for the great work.

Ruto Kuntai
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