I think maybe it's a little too soon to tell, but it sounds all right. Honestly though, you could have done the reasonable thing, and made kim a seperate character if you're going to change her background so much. But i'll be waiting for more

I like this story so far! Your right too, it wouldn't be Edward sissorhands if Edward didn't have any sissor hands.

This story is so amazing already, and I can't wait to read more...I have read every Edward scissorhands story on this site and I have seen a wide range of ways their written.The kind your writing is my favorite kind though, because of the originality but well written at the same time. For all those people who don't like it, keep ignoring them, because as long as their are people who like it(like me) theirs a reason to keep going...also you might also decide to rewrite this story one day a an original story but with a similar plot.Thats what I'm doing...I started a story called Captured Innocence,(and edward scissorhands story of course) and I liked the plot so much that now I'm writing an original story that I plan to publish one day...if you want to look at it the fanfiction I wrote is here and my original is here: http://deafield.

sorry if I'm annoying you,but I want to show you that originality is good...and one more thing...remember there will always be critics, but as long as you have confidence in yourself you'll be fine.^_^

Dea

I want to know what happnes next! please please please write more chapters! XD

Interesting...
~The Phanatics~

Great chapter! Please keep writing!

nice, i would really like to read the rest! keep writing!

Great story so far, I'll keep reading! Please update as soon as you can!

update please!

You have 15 reviews and you STILL haven't updated?!?! What's wrong with you? Can't you see that we wanna read more?!? Keep writing please! I love this story!!

i would really like to see the scene between kim and edward now that kim lived a different life.i cant wait till you update.also i would not reccomend saying you need a certain amount of reviews so you will writethe next chapter,not a lot of people will review or even read the story.on a happier note your doing an awsome job,this is a great story.

Come on, you've got 14 reviews now...aren't you ever gonna update? It's so good, I like the new take on Kim's family. The writing is truly excellent. Please?

I agree with scary-fangirl and MaryBeth. You are taking dramatic lisence just too far, and kind of ruining everything.

Wait... so are you just kinda trying to re-write the story of Edward Scissorhands? Does he even Have Scissorhands in this? Is he just plain Edward? So very confused am I. Cause, I don't understand, Are you seriously changing the story!?! Making Peg an Alcaholic! No Kevin and a Dad who's never there? Awful. Awful. Awful. I really love Edward Scissorhands though. So...Just out of pure curiostity as to where you are planning on taking this story, I would like you to continue, I guess. Though I can't see how some of the reviewers called this story sweet. I mean it's only the first chapter and... well, this is really the longest review I've ever made so I'll just end it there... yep.

no i havent fogotten awbout this story so dont worry guys ill update soon. my other computer crashed and erased everything! WAA!