and then trunks comes in...jkjk love this story, it is really good, i LOVE it

great story! i absolutely loved it! :D

Nice work but you should have put Marron with Trunks since Pan is related to Goten and Goten is now related to Trunks, and liking Bra, his sister, who would also be related to him, is just...well, you know what I mean.

i liked it...it was romantic lol maybe you should be a lil' more descriptive...and a lil' longer but it was perfect the way it is now...plz check out my stories! _

you should so continue this story! i love it so much!
Danielle

i loved the story!very romantic! bra and goten are so perfect for each other!

YAY! This Goten/Bra fic is excellent too! Wow! Well, I know that you really, really like G/B's now! I saw that you had another one too, so I'll probably be reviewing that one after this. But really, this one shot was absolutely wonderful. I love how you display Goten and Bra both. Very sweet.

SWT! KUTE!

That's so nice!It's nice to see a guy writing such beautiful things!ROCK ON!

Wow - nice! I'm starting to think that maybe you're really a girl pretending to be a guy (lol...j/k!).

Might have liked it better if I knew the song you used. :P Still very good however!

omg...G/B FOREVER

Ur so damn good at romance fics...

CONTINUE...tell me its not done im to sleepy to look for my self hey it is 1 a.m. what can i say how about i totally HATE DETEST HOMEWORK... AND / SKOOL... but my my friends r totally cool... now u continue like a good no great boy aight?

Sorry to tired to say anything else ill review 2marrow...

nice fic! very cute!

OMG that was too sweet! I like the Goten/Bra pairing

Awww I love this fanfic its soo romantic and sweet, I love bra goten fanfics

That one one hell of a good story!