"Sit UBU sit! Good dog!"

Hehehe, that made me crack up. XD

I'm sorry, but that sounds nothing like what any of the characters would do. Plus, Marty is not a punk...difference between punk and semi-lazy cool kid. And he only cursed like twice in the movie. In this, he says a curse word almost every five lines! Same w/ the other characters. That makes it very unrealistic and boring. Sorry.

Wow, that was great! But such vulgar language from Jennifer, lol! I liked it a lot!

A fantastic story. You really did a good job.

KICK **!!!