Hilarious! Continue on with the story please!

This is a good start. Being a pisces myself you know I had to read it. I'd like to see something continue out of this.

Who? Who? Please write more.

Great story so far! I don't think it's that bad. I Like having Greg there. It'll be fun to have him do some crazy thing!

Very cute! I love it! (And don't ever apologize for mentioning my boyfriend ...erm, I mean Greg ;-))

THis sounds great so far, i dont blame you for putting greg in, he realy lightens it up.

THis is brillant and i hope you post more soon.

Becca

Bring Greg into it! His meddlesome antics would surely bring the un-ship into focus! Greg is fabulous and this is cute. Keep it going?