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Venera22 2008-04-20 . chapter 7
I don't really know what to say except it really told a story that was heartbreaking.. and true. Last week, there was a lockout at my school, we were all trapped inside not knowing what the heck was happening.. There was a guy outside with a gun.. Lunckily nobody got hurt but I can tell you the things you wrote in here, the character's thoughts and everything were pretty acurate. Anyway, great job and thanks for this.
iene 2008-04-06 . chapter 7
haley died?? shes my fav character ever! but a gud story nevertheless. u managed 2 make me shed a few tears
Stoneage Woman 2007-11-25 . chapter 7
Beautiful. Heartbreaking. How the heck do you write so well?
EugeneElizabeth3 2007-10-19 . chapter 7
Holy crap: this is amazing! I liked how it stayed true to the show with Lucas carrying Peyton out - I LOVE that scene. I was almost crying at that last chapter, honestly, my throat was burning! I hate the fact that Haley died, but it just makes it all the more realistic. Great job!
1treehillcharmed 2007-10-06 . chapter 7
I hope you are happy. you succeded in writing the first fanfiction story to make me cry. the part that said 'And on this day, this perfect, sunny, miserable day, Lucas and Haley would share another memory to add to the millions they already had. But this one would be different. This would be their last memory.' that really got to me. brilliantly written.
Lieselot 2007-08-08 . chapter 7
I loved this story, it was so intens and sad. I'm currently doing a Tree Hill shooting story, it's hard to write, you know what I mean ? Knowing it really happens in the real word and writing about it in a story, it's weird, it just feels strange every time I write a new chapter. You know ?
Lieselot 2007-08-08 . chapter 3
nice, nice, sad, but very well written, off to read the next chappie
Lieselot 2007-08-08 . chapter 2
this is an amazing story, of to read the next chapter
Lieselot 2007-08-08 . chapter 1
nice, of to read more
Fatelover 2007-04-29 . chapter 7
I love your fanfic! IT was so suspensful...I couldn't stop reading it! At first, I was sad that Haley was killed off, but it just seemed to make the story that much better. I really like the Brathan pairing. If you make a sequel, you should make NAthan and Brooke ned up together.
xoxliiy 2007-02-06 . chapter 7
aww omg
i actually cried a bit, pathetic i kno haha

so good!
Michaela 2006-07-24 . chapter 7
I just got into One Tree Hill at then end of the third season, in one episode before the school shooting one. Before writing this story, which I checked the date for when you completed it and it was way before the episode, that Tree Hill would have a school shooting? I swear to god it's like your psychic! And how in your story it said how one of the shooters killed themselves, That's what Jimmy did in the school shooting episode. I really loved your story. It was one of the most incredable fanfiction stories I have ever read. Maybe even the best. I actually started to cry while I read this. The emotions of the characters were so beautifully written.

Anyways, again I loved your story. I hope to read more fanfiction by you. Continue writing. You have a real knack for it.

Michaela
Courtney0722 2006-07-21 . chapter 7
I just read this now and I have to say that it was one of the best written OTH fics I've ever read. I actually felt like it was happening right in front of me...I could see everything. You really captured the incident and the aftermath was done amazing. I felt so many emotions reading this and even cried throughout it. You had me thinking Lucas, Brooke, Haley or Peyton would be the ones to die and I was never sure until it actually happened.
This may have been terribly sad, but I loved it! It was done better then the actual school shooting episode in one tree hill...much more real.
starcastic 2006-05-04 . chapter 2
fantastic so far, i really really like it.
inluvwitOTH 2006-05-02 . chapter 7
This would be my first review of your story tho...And i just wanted to say that i've never been in so much emotions before...My feelings are scattered all around me...I laughed, i screamed, i panic, i cried, i prayed, i hated, and i loved...Your writing of this story had me glued to the computer cause i never wanted to stop reading it...It's hard to lose someone, especially the one that we love...But it's even harder to went through such experience and live to tell about it...Definately the best sorta-real-life OTH fic that i've ever come across...You're an amazing writer!! Keep up the good work..and let you imagination run wild...Congratulation on a story well written!! :D
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