I LOVE THIS STORY!

Omg, I'm sorry but such a build up & such a mediocre ending. This was like, like, well blue balls as a male could say or proverbial "azul majora" for a fem fatale. The fires were stoked & then well. Okay I'll stop & cold shower it. Good story just wish the end had more well climatic adverbs. Thanks for writing it all the same.

Well, seeing as this is your first review on this story, I'll try to make it a good one for you. First of all, I loved it. I love the whole tension thing between them. I love the fact that they both feel the smame things, but are too stupid not to tell the other what they're feeling. I love how you captured the essence of what Imzadi really is. I love reading about sexual tension between characters I like. The feeling of anxiety is, for lack of a better word, intoxicating. When finishing reading this, all I wanted was more. It was a great way to end it, but I still wanted more. You did very well with this story. Give yourself a pat on the back.