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Shipper 6/2/07 . chapter 1 5,574 words without A/N whichs brings the total to 5,671 |
Lola Laflaunda 7/10/06 . chapter 1 That. Was. AWESOME! loved it! |
Jana 4/4/06 . chapter 1 Okay, nachdem ich meinem Englisch auf Grund der "Nichtnutzung" momentan überhaupt nicht vertaue und du eh in der gleichen Ecke lebst, geb ich meinen Senf auf Deutsch dazu. Im Gegensatz zu einigen der SU2-Stories, die ich grad gelesen hab, dast du sehr offensichtlich Talent zum schreiben. Ich mag deinen Stil, er ist flüssig und zieht einen in seinen Bann. Die Dialoge klingen nicht hölzern, wie es oft vielen anderen passiert, sondern scheinen fast hörbar zu sein. Eindeutig sehr gut lesbar! Die Idee an sich - der Contest - war mal was völlig anderes und trotzdem sehr realistisch. Denn was gibt es besseres, als zu schreiben, um sich etwas von der Seele zu reden? Sogar Kates unbewusste Handlung, die Disk mit zur Arbeit zu nehmen, obwohl sie sie dort nicht brauchte, ist ralitätsnäher, als manch einer vielleicht denken mag. Also alles in allem: Sehr gut geschrieben - ich mag die Story wirklich! Ich kram mich jetzt mal noch durch ein paar andere Sachen von dir - mal sehen, ob sich der Stil hält. ;) (Leider gibts bei dir zu wenige Sachen, die mein Sereintechnisches Interese treffen.) |
Elli 3/23/06 . chapter 1 again, a real neat piece of work. Very subtle! One aspect I like about all your stories: there's always some funny lines, regardless of how touching, sigh, they may be otherwise. (Kleenex, please.) I also like the ending a lot, where your story develops almost screw-ball like qualities. (and slightly feminist, ones,oh, yes, with the muse and all; reverse roll of female writer-male muse etc!). Keep it coming! |
Gothic Guardian 7/9/05 . chapter 1Sorry, I just realized I never reviewed this... It is, obviously, splended. And I can't wait for your next fic. So send me the rest to beta... It's riviting! (As was this one...) So I need more of your stuff. Send it now! (*-Puppy-Dog eyes-*) |
Saeloriel 6/5/05 . chapter 1hey, i like your story. i like the way it's written and i hope to read more from you soon |
Gem6 3/27/05 . chapter 1Wow! That was really really sweet, I could just imagine it all happening in front of me, like I was stood outside the window watching! You're very talented, keep writing! Gem xx |
LMR 1/25/05 . chapter 1That was a nice bit of fluff to brighten my day. If you're not watching it, you ought to check out NCIS. There are two characters there that really remind me of them. That story really rocks! |
Sue 1/15/05 . chapter 1 Hey I really love this story. It's so cute. There are so less SU2 Storys and I'm always happy to read one. You really have to write more Stories or continue this one.I'm really looking forward to this. You're a great writer. I want more! |
mutantfreek 12/5/04 . chapter 1Aww, such a sweet story! It's nice to see a new SU2 story, and that I'm not alone. I think you put Nick a bit out of character, but it's been so long I couldn't be sure. But I do love your story! |
Cellar Door 26 11/28/04 . chapter 1oh, i love this show, and this fanfic for that matter, you are such a greart writter! |