very good but Amon is 25

Aw! that was so cute! nice job!

i loved this story. it leaves you in suspense to see what will happen to Amon & Robin after this. i absolutely, positively, definately LOVED the ending! All you need to do now is to write a sequal.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

What will happen next? Will Amon work on controling his craft? What about them as a couple? Please post more as soon as possible.

I love this story. It rocks! I really enjoyed how you made it sound serious at first and then brought a romantic twist in. You should write professionally.

Was that the end of it, because if it was, it was great, and if it wasnt then it was great, its a win or win situation. I really enjoyed reading it.

Beautiful! I like Amon's open words and honesty, usually it's very hard to pull that off with his character. I hope you continue this!

Amazing, simply amazing. i hope you make a second chapter because this was just perfect. Not even Amon seemed out of place ^__^ great job and they make such a great couple. Oh and actually Amon is 10 years older than Robin but maybe you cnahed it to fit the story.

Chapter two? When are you posting a chapter two?

I like what you have so far. It's good. I hope you write more. ^_^