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Reviews For: Out of Breath

bookworm45 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful. I'm so new to the fandom I've never seen the episode you refer to, but I enjoyed your story very much! That was incredibly beautiful. Thank you.
TwistedSister03 2007-10-28 ch 1,	abuseaw i am soo sad that its over. that was a great story. keep up the great work! it birghtened up my day! thank you for that =]
christina 2007-05-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw that was cute
beLLA 2007-01-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI loved it! I couldn't stop reading it, the story really came alive I totally pictured last scene. So good!
Phyrefly 2005-12-11 ch 1,	abuseThat was such the perfect story. The way you described everything- the emotions, the scenery, the people and their personalities. Absolutely gorgeous. You are an amazing writer.
lunatic fringe 2005-11-15 ch 1,	abuseaw, i love eric -- especially when he's with calleigh. :D really long, but worth it. i enjoyed it.
Sara 2005-03-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseAW!! Huggles computer That was a great story! I loved the emotion you added in. It was so real! I loved E/C so much and your story really brought out a great angle to their relationship. Personally, I think just holding someone you love can mean so much more than just jumpin in the sack with them. This story was soo shweet! ~ Sara ~
Meredith44 2004-12-02 ch 1,	abuseI haven't really been a shipper of couples on CSI Miami, but was a bit intrigued by the idea of C/E and decided to investigate it. I have to say that I loved this story. I would be very interested in seeing more of what you might write for C/E.
Caderyn 2004-11-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is so awesome! The ending was such a good-goosebumpy-kinda moment, if that makes sense. That image of Calleigh standing before cascading water was incredible. Well done! You've really managed to go into amazing depths exploring the characters' emotions. I think I'll hold this fic in mind when I (finally) get to see 'Crime Wave' (living in Australia, I have to wait 'til next year to watch Season 3 - I haven't even seen the Miami/NY crossover!). I agree with one of your reviewers though - I certainly see signs between C/E and am glad that more people are beginning to write fics about them.
CS 2004-11-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think you did a good job capturing all the emotions that could go through someone's thoughts, Eric's thoughts, with his place destroyed. I really like the glimpse into his thoughts and the relationship you portray between he and Calleigh, it seems very true to the characters. Your dialogue is also very well done and flows well with the narration.
CS 2004-11-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think you did a good job capturing all the emotions that could go through someone's thoughts, Eric's thoughts, with his place destroyed. I really like the glimpse into his thoughts and the relationship you portray between he and Calleigh, it seems very true to the characters. Your dialogue is also very well done and flows well with the narration.
sharp-mind 2004-11-16 ch 1,	abuseWow, I've enjoyed this story so much! Love the plot, the characters are really fine written. You made such a great Eric and such a great Calleigh. Beutiful, so tender and in a way so sad. You MUST write more about Cal & Eric! Kudos!
Janetmaca 2004-11-16 ch 1,	abuseAww, it was so great. I'm proud of you C.
East-Wing-Witch 2004-11-15 ch 1,	abuseAS a rule, I don't generally read CSI Miami fics, but this was intruging and well written. Nice insights into characters and their emotions. And I support the pairing...the signs are all there!
Jolein 2004-11-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is great! I absolutly loved it. I felt so sad for Eric and for Calleigh to be so sweet,great. Please write more

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