do not stop this is a command(kidding) keep this story up(not Kidding)!

that was good. i would love to see a few more chapters to find out what happens next!

Hey, where have you been hiding all this time? Haven't heard of a story form you as of late.

Up until now anyway.

This was really good! The drama in the beginning and then the little pinch of N/S at the end was awseome.

And i for one am glad you didn;t end with a "Will you marry me" scene. this story was way to good for that cheesy stuff.