Is this Kura talking? It sounds like it might be. I like this poem and your other also. Good job.

Beautiful. I love this one so much

most excellent as always! glad to be an inspiration and help with the poem's writings. it was wonderful. a true meaning. from the outside looking in. very deep. i love it.

~Darkfire~

aw... continue! this is rly good!

Aw...That was really pretty too!