GOOD! SO damn good :-)

Very sweet! loved it!

wonderful

Well done. You really captured Buffy's thoughts in this scene.

SOB!

More please!

Insightful into that intriguing thing which is the mind and emotions of Buffy Summers during what is without a doubt a very difficult time for her. Excellent use of the Buffy POV here, especially in regards to her feelings and thoughts towards Spike, her family, and her own mortality. (Also, bonus points for making me laugh with the line about "...if I walked in on Xander watching Masterpiece Theater or if I heard Tara swearing like a truck driver...") But back to the point: the emotions behind this work are very aptly expressed. More than just average entertainment, this story was very thoughtful. Keep up the great work.

Nice insight!