another great fic. loved the puzzle theme. simply wonderful.

~Sapphire

Molly Prewett not o' conner

Interesting word choices, very evocative. So good on you for the some nice poetry, if you will.

Unfortunately, you lost me when Molly entered the picture. First off, she's 10-15 years older than the Marauders and wouldn't have been at school with them. Malfoy would probably have been at school with Arthur and Molly, but at least 3 or 4 years behind them. She's not too likely to shagging a little boy, you know?