 Jeremy Shane 2008-07-31 . chapter 4good chapter & more please |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-07-31 . chapter 2good chapter |
 mapetite16 2008-04-01 . chapter 4Oh my whats going to happen next I need to know. Update soon. |
 JUJUChick16 2008-03-31 . chapter 4That was a great update. Wish it was longer, update soon! |
 JamesOlson 2008-03-30 . chapter 4 I love it so far! PPMS! |
 coffee-lova85 2008-01-07 . chapter 3awesome update!! please post more soon. :P |
 mapetite16 2008-01-07 . chapter 3I like this story, I can't wait to read more of it. |
 coffee-lova85 2008-01-05 . chapter 2i like this story. please update! |
 wigglesfunk 2007-04-24 . chapter 2I need MORE! It's so wonderfully written and I just LOVE it! |
 Eljay27 2007-02-28 . chapter 2 Interesting thread for a story line, hope u continue this story further... |
 theo darkstar 2006-10-11 . chapter 2ohh very interesting...please update..just for me? |
 midnight893 2006-05-23 . chapter 1This is so so good! Keep going! |
 tommygirl93 2005-08-21 . chapter 1this story has a gret start please hurry ad rite more! |
 Helen Racine 2005-07-21 . chapter 1Hm! Neat! Looking forwards to more! |
 WaffleNinja 2005-05-09 . chapter 1Please keep writing because this sounds really interesting! Is she gonna have powers too? Because I think (and my opinion doesn't have to mean anything, by the way) that it wouldn't be as good if she did, but I do like the whole 'vulnerable child could slip up' approach. |