Very cute! Absolutely loved it. I've been working on an idea for a FAKE fic lately and decided to check out a few stories on the site to see what's been done, and stumbled across yours. Very well-written for just fifteen minutes. Did you edit it, or is this the first draft?

Also, what's the name of the game? I'm really curious ... it sounds familiar but I can't put my finger on it.

What kind of challenge did you take? Was it just something between you and a friend or was this something from a website I can check out?

I hope you get back to me. Again, absolutely loved it ... every character is flawless and i can't think of any criticism whatsoever.

Good job!

*Shakes Head Wistfully, 1st At Them, then at U*

U know I REALLY L-O-V-E! The Way U Write -My 3 Fav. Guys from the "Fake"-verse-! It's EXACTLY the kinda things I think they might get up to -If I Myself Ever Wrote About them-!-!-! Only U seem Not Only to KNOW Exactly What *MY* Dee,Ryo&Bikky Would DO! YOU E-V-E-N Have the TALENT Of Writing it in such A Way, that completely DRAWS 1 INTO their WONDERFUL World! & MAKES U LOVE them EVEN M-O-R-E-!-!-! So 4 this I'd Like to Offer my HEARTFELT T-H-A-N-X! & SINCERELY Hope! that U'll Write MORE -Soon-!-!-!

Hehe, "Sure, sure, sure. If you say so." I loved it. One of those cute little moments we don't get to see too often around this site. Good job.

thats cute

anou..whats this game by the way? i have no idea what this is but i like the way you wrote it.