That's great! However, really sad:(

That mermaid story was really interesting, and I rarely see it used in fics. The way you've utilized it is brilliant, and so sad because they won't remember it.

Very sad, but also very sweet. :)

*Gush of tears* That is so, *sniffles* sweet and sad! Very well written, the only inconsistency I see is leon's lighter doesn't work but he's smoking later_; but maybe I missed something. I would deffinently like to have more of this!

U... Nice. This one I like.

(Fanfiction is evil. Makes me want to read PsoH all over again. And I only own volumes 7 to 10.)

Mata ne

Luv, rebecca

I really like this story even if it does have a bittersweet ending. This is only my third psoh and everyone has been great. Keep up the great job.

Buh-Bye _

Very cute. I like, but it's kinda troubling.

wow...I mean...wow. REALLY good! I loved it! The only part that was a bit 'shaky' was the...um...'im still throwing you in jail' part. I don't know why _;; But everything else was GREAT!

it was very well done and it was very cute and everything but... it was just so short. Which isnt a bad thing but I think you make the audience wanting more for you story. maybe you can make another a little bit longer eh?

I love this. It's short, but poignant, and very true to the characters. Good job. Please right more stories (preferably longer ones)

*squeals* _ I love this. I kinda assumed they had a talk in these sort of fasion in book 8. You captured the character's quite well. I can't really find any faults in it really. Nothing to really help you with either, o.o; _ Which means it is just an overly awesome fanfic. Keep up the good work!

(does a dance) HAPPY! vov Ya see, I posted a request for something like this in a forum somewhere (I can't realy recall, too stressed out). Great ficcie. My fave lines were:

"I think I might love you, my dear detective."

"Yeah, same here. I'm still going to throw you in jail, though."

Whoo, that was yay!

OK, I've blabbed enough. Here, have a cookie. _v

Cute & tragic . . . is that possible?

Oh, I like this a lot. It's just what I like to imagine really happened at the end of "Deep." It's very well-written, too, and D and Leon sound perfectly in-character. Thank you for sharing this!