AMAZING! SIMPLY FANTASTIC! UPDATE SOON!

I hope the following chapter will soon come ! D

I liked it !

WTF! This is one weird story you got here but it's awsome at the same time! Update soon!

O_O Aw... the hot scene was nice while it lasted ._.;... Ah... O Huzah for VaronAnzuness... hm... is this going to have any AmeldaAnzu too? *Current OTP* ;... UPDATE!

O_O hahahahahahahahahah..._ that was so funny and and cool! You should make this a love triangle- Amelda/Anzu/Varon. There are barely any fics with them ;_;. Anyways good job! O ohh yeah one more thing (slaps Valon)

Valon: X_x what did i do?

Me: Thats for being a pervert! _

Valon: but..but..It was an accident!

Me: (reading a book) uh huh _ (turns page)

Valon: @_@ really it was.

Anzu: (comes into room) There you are panty stealer!

Valon: oh shit!...AH

Me: O_O um update soon and keep up the good work!

This review is for chapters 3 and four. Oh my goodness! Hahahaha! Raphael and all the ninja stuff was hilarious! I also loved the big musical number by Claire and he keeps trying to make Amelda a woman! Heheh oh and Varon the panty snatcher was the craziest of all!

Hahahha! The whole musical number scene was hilarious! Hahahah and I love the adventures of Varon/Valon the pantysnatcher!

haha - another gread chapter! XD

O_O *IS DYING ON LAUGHTER* OMG. THIS IS HILARIOUS. HILARIOUS! ... Too bad there wasn't an Anzu/Varon lemon... T_T XD

... Make this VaronxAnzu? *_* PLEASE? :D

DON'T YOU DARE CALL THOSE DARLING ROOS RATS, JOU! *whacks him* _ Being from Australia myself, I like kangaroos. So don't diss kangaroos. *glares at Jou*

please update!

oh please - write more!

Thats so awesome!

IT WAS HILARIOUS!

KEPT THE WORK LIKE THAT GIRL!

Another great chapter! Hahahha I haven't laughed this hard in ages!

Hahahah! I love this! I love how Dartz keeps shocking them. His whole plan is crazy but funny!

Wow! You gave me a heart attack when I saw that you updated. I feel so sorry for Raphael, he did not deserve that...but it was fun to picture. I can't think of anything for Varon, but I'm sure you have plans. And do make the manga! That would rock my socks!

Soba