great! when r u going to get the next chapter after finally out? i had already revied that chapter and u cant do 2 reviews on a chapter. i wanna read more! i cant wait for that hot foursome thats bound to happen!
Hater B. Trippin 8/7/10 . chapter 20
Back when I was new to the YGO fandom, I once shared this story with everyone I met. Now I see how stupid I was.. you have totally demolished Malik as a character. He isn't an utter spazz, nor does he suffer from any form of sugar high. AU or not, you should be ashamed of that. It's bad enough that 4kids made him and his darker half into mere parodies of what they were, but now we have fans reading this smutty fluff and going with 'Malik is so kawaii Desu! Desu!' _ Bah. Thanks for that.
finally for kura and ryou now when's the finally for kura, ryou, marik and malik? ive been waiting for like 500 years to read it! ok well not that long but it seems like it! i hate waiting specially with stories as good as this!
Okay, I just spent two days reading this whole fic and I can honestly say WOW, complete with jaw-dropping action!
I LOVED this story! I'll admit, the foursome thing kinda confused me at first, but I was drawn into it and found it kind of cute. _ I hope I'm open-minded more about things, because I just loved all of this. I especially love Malik to death because he reminds me of a little puppy, so every scene that involved him was a treat for me. *wants to hug him so bad now*
Your sex is frequent and awesome and that's what makes a good yaoi, plus, I've always liked high school fics like this where we get to see our favorite characters living lives like real people.
All in all, the whole thing is cute, funny (I've burst out laughing more times than I can count), sweet, and sexy. All make a good story and you have talent! I can't wait for you to update, if you're still writing this. *does puppy dog eyes* Please update soon! I'd be a shame to leave this story hanging.
god honda would make the perfect punching bag, he's so stupid he acts just like my grandma does, i can sympthsize with yugi, im bi and even my mom talks like honda does sometimes. no one in my family knows about me being bi except my cousin ashley, but damn its hard living with knowing everything could change in ur life, ur friends, faimly, they way they act towards u, if they just find out that one stupid little detail about u liking the same sex T-T it sucks
I love the comment Bakura's homeroom teacher made about the apocalypse.
Naomi 6/19/09 . chapter 13
I really love this story! It's very good, though you could work on thickening the plot some. A couple chapters back, there was that old couple at Marik's appartment building, could you write a one-shot from thier POV? Maybe we could get some of the teacher's POV? I like being able to see all the angles of a story. Also, why doesn't Ryou move in with Bakura? Or with Marik and Malik? Another point I'd like to make is that Honda doesn't seem like the type to be a homophobe, at least, not in the series. I hope you continue to write!
Miss ladywolf, I beg of you, finish this story! I am absolutely in love with it, and I know you haven't updated it in over three years, but should you get the bunny to cooperate, please give all your fans an update!
Well, guess sooner didn't work so well, huh? But I beg you not to abandon this ficcie, because first, I love the pairing and second, it's getting better each instant and it was good to begin with! I can't wait to read about how Ryou's uncle finds out (probably by Honda) and Malik's past popping up (maybe in form of his parents showing up?) and Honda... bitching? Maybe he's jealous? Some of those who act that extreme are just homosexual themselves and to afraid to admit it. Gasp! This is not another fic in which Honda has fallen for Ryou secretly, is it? He always seems to do that coupled with his bad-guy-role. Anyway, I'd like to get a short snapshot on Anzu, too, how she handles her crush and such. Oh, and can't forget the little Seto/Jou bit. Is Jou with Mai? Hell, that would be one of a kind triangle to solve. Don't guess Seto's bi-sexual, too, ne?
Please tell me if you are going to update some day!