nice

There was something captivating about. It's Harry's confidence, or at least stride at confidence, and determination that forms him to be a strong wizard. Considering the second prophecy the introduction of Gryffindor and unlocking a few of Harry's abilities was not outlandish. The way you had the story lead to the Raiders was believable, it could happen. It wasn't a pin drop and Harry was the most powerful intelligent person in the world, the writing in those stories... lacks reality, emotion, depth, character development, etc... The New Order captures characters well, explains them. Even his parents showing up didn't seem unreal, especially with the explanation of Susan Bones parents. It would be of a great pleasure if you would continue with the sequel someday soon. Time doesn't always seem as it actually is... I should probably stop reading so much and write the next chapter for one of my own stories. I've practically written a novel in this review! *chuckles* Well... not quite. Thank you for sharing. Your writing is well. There were a few small mistakes I had noticed in some chapters, but I should've noted them down for I do not remember. Thanks Again!

~ Miss Eliza Azraelian.

good story.

My thought about the fic as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assh0les.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

O, you mentioned anamargus transformation training. That's going to be interesting.

I know that as the author of the story you get to decide how to procede. But as the reader, I get to decide to continue to read or not. I was thoroughly enjoying the first two chapters of, but I don't want to read a polygamy story, so I'll just leave now. I wish I'd known before I started reading.

Great story. Loved what u did with the sr.Potters

My prayers are with you for a full recovery. Please take case.

This is one of the best HP stories I've ever read, even if I'm highly disappointed with what seems to be a very unresolved end. I'm glad I only read the whole thing now, seeing as there were 8 months between the completion of this story and the start of the sequel. Cliff-hangers kill me! Still, it's fabulous, and I hope the next one will be as well.

so it is Blasie, Susan, Marietta, and Tonks are his brides?

What another great chapter I love this bet from Blaise; Those thoughts however were quickly driven from her mind as her father, Severus Snape, of all people began singing the next song. A tune he entitled, ‘my pecker just won’t stand up anymore.’ With her face flaming red from embarrassment she grabbed her Hufflepuff companion by the arm and quickly fled the area.


Keep up the great work.

mcgonagall taught snape and potter as kids didn't she? she and snape wrong plot and thats sick eww ew ew

great story.
I was wondering if the sequel was going to be posted anytime soon.

Hi. I was wondering if you were going to still do the Sequel or not.

hey man whens the sequel commin? stop holdin out on us!