This is amazing. I'm so proud of you honey. The detail in the letter, the drama between "not going to find out about the youngling" to dying against another person with a red lightsaber. This is well done, hon.

Very nice. I enjoy these small but very good fics. not much other then that I like it ;)

Ooh, cool. I like how sudden the knowledge of her death is. You build it up--it's not too shoking after her letter--but it's so stark and unexpected. "Age at death: 25" That's all you say, and it's beautiful. Interesting backstory; do these characters appear in other storie you've written, or was this a one-shot thing? If they don't, you should definately think about working with them some more, because there's great potential both in earlier-set pieces and with Letlan later. I'm not too sure about the Jedi thing--it might actually be more powerful if she was "just another rebel"--but it certainly lends interest to the story, especially with how she falls to (I assume) Vader. Was she what slowed his progress down enough that the Falcon was able to escape? Intriguing. Nicely written, it feels very real. A few typos, if you feel like catching them; they don't detract, I just don't know how much of a perfectionist you might so thought I'd point it out for your peace of mind. You give the exposition and background very well, letting us know the history of the characters without making the information seem forced. Well told!