Very cool. Susan and Marcus are just the ultimate doomed couple. At least John and Delenn get 20 years. Very nicely written. Thank you for writing. :-)

(sobs) Beautiful! I can really actually see that! (sobs again) Then Marcus goes and dies, and, and... (sobs)

Awww...dat was sweet! :) Good job!

Great story, but then yours almost always are.

It was a great story... a few grammatical errors or missing words, but the concept was great!