Yep, I'm reading this one too. Nice start. I can already see why people would get mad at you FOR NOT UPDATING FOR TWO YEARS! This is probably one of the best first person stories out there. Usually they come off as wordy, and the descriptions used often make the caracter sound like they're constantly thinking about themselves. (boy I read one the other week...ugh.) BUT! Yours was fantastic! I loved it. Perfectly written Darn you Tucks! (that's gonna be my new catch phrase)

Great! This is the first POTC fic I've read, and It's quite good! Haha! I noticed in your A/N you used "LOL"

ahem. But really interesting. I want to see what's in store for Suzume. Please update soon!

Good story, Darren Shann like. :) Update soon

I think this is really awesome, ven though you have probably given up on it. I really think you should update if you can and this is a great vampire story. I am a really big fan of vampires, so to me, this is a great story.

This story has a wonderful supernatural element, a great voice, & adds to my obsession with vampires. And soon, once Jack is thrown in the mix, it will only add to my high.

Woah hey! I only got my Review History back up so didn't know if you had updated yet! It's still a good story though! And don't worry about not being updating for long periods of time, I do that too _

Still great! Continue please!

THis is really good, I really enjoy your writing style. Please update when you have the time because I would love to see how you involve Jack.

i like where this is going keep writting please

Wow. I worship the ground you walk on. Anyone that can combine Vampires, POTC, and especially Captain Jack Sparrow, deserves to be pampered for the rest of their lives. This is an amazing story, please do continue.

Been A while I almost didn't recognize the name. Yay JAck's finaly here. :) And don't stop writing, that is an order. . . Ok it's a request. Hope to see you sooner next time.

oh, this is really good so far! I can't wait until Jack officially gets introduced into the story. When i was reading this, for some reason i was putting your story into the plot for the movie (and book, of course) Interview with the Vampire. I have a thing for vampires, they're so erotic, haha! Update soon!

*bounces in anticipation* My, God, child...please update soon!

IT IS A VERY GOOD STORY!

I need to know what happens...it's very, very, very GOOD!

it was good write some more! :-)

Good, I like. A little on the wordy side for my taste but still wonderful. I can't wait to see how you write Jack.

Hey! What the heck did you stop for? Continue, please! Can't wait to see how Jack changed her life (or unlife...whatever). Yeah, I like it.