beautiful... absolutely beautiful. there just are no other words for it.

I know this was posted over a year ago, but I just recently found it and had to comment on it.

I loved it -- it was so nicely written, and Tracker's character was so believable.

I wish I could say something smart or constructive, but I'm drawing a blank here. I just wanted to tell you that I think it's awesome.

wow this story is so good i thing it is the best i have reed and i thing tracker was vary what i thing he would be like ur ar really good at this... btw just so u know seans middel name is hope not miles i would like the extended author’s notes/after thoughts...let me know what u want from me like my e-mail or what thank u and keep up the awsome work

wow - i was recommended to read your stories from my rock star friend lane, and i have to say, i was not disappointed. i have never had so much perception into the lives of television characters. you have a scary albeit gorgeous talent, lady. use it. you're going to be my bar.

This story is definitely the best that I've ever read on this site. I was so upset that Ellie died, but you still wrote it beautifully. The saddest thing was the fact that she died without knowing that Tracker cared, and that he was coming back for her.

You are a brilliant author and you should definitely get published some day!

The end of this chapter was so sad.

I liked how Tracker has matured since the beginning of the story, and I really hope he's not too late. I'm gonna guess that she'll lose the baby but I really hope she doesn't die.

I can't believe she's pregnant! I wish this story wasn't ending in two chapters. It is so good!

Oh shit! I almost feel bad for them that Sean found out...though I know what it feels like to be cheated on, so I feel more sympathy for Sean.

This was my favorite part of the chapter:

"I kissed her hard and touched her hair, touched my oldest T-shirt against her skin. Seventeen-year-old me was touching seventeen-year-old her and for a moment, what we were doing didn’t feel like the most fucked up shit on the planet."

I love this story and I don't want to finish reading it because I don't want it to end!

I'm glad he's not leaving!

I pictured Ellie soaked in her clothes and Tracker hugging her while he was naked and I had to laugh. It's funny but sad at the same time. I can't believe she said she loved him!

Great chapter. I just watched One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest the other night for the first time! Okay, anyway...I was wondering why Ashley wouldn't have been telling Ellie about Craig's issues. They're supposed to be best friends. That made me wonder if there was something going on between Sean and Ashley. Hmm...

Amazing chapter, as always. You always end them perfectly. You're definitely one of the best writers on this site.

This was definitely, by far, the best chapter of the entire story. (okay, so I know I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I still think it will be the best one).

I loved this part: "I know. Please don't kiss me.

Why not?

Because I'm going to let you."

The graphicness of the chapter was fine...it was actually the best sex scene I've ever read on ff...possibly the best one I've ever read, even counting actual books. It wasn't full of crap, and it just seemed real.

I loved the ending too, where Tracker said "I am a shitty person."

It'll be interesting to see if Sean finds out (which I'm sure he will) and what will happen when he does.

I really like the way you've developed Tracker's character...how he realized that he and Sean switched roles.

"And for awhile there, everything was normal. We laughed, we called each other names, we ate cheap cereal. Sometimes, when the world is crumbling, that's all you can do."

That was the best part of the chapter...it reminds me of my sister and I.

Awesome chapter! I finally have time to read more. I love this story.

i have to tell you, this is one of the most stunning stories i've ever read. i feel a lot like Ellie... my life takes the same twists and turns as hers does, and i deal with it the same as she does. you wrote my story here, and i'm trying hard to make sure that the ending turns out differently. you're an amazing writer, and you do an incredible job of capturing desperation. thank you for writing this.