That was really nice. Well done xx

Awe, so sweet. When I was little that episdoe used to make me cry (still does...come to think of it) I love how you use the "fox speak" so sweet.

Although I havn't seen round the twist in a LONG time, Grandpa's gifts was one of the episodes that stuck with me the most strongly, and your fanfic made me remember it more clearly. THANKYOU!

I'm liking the perspective here. I don't normally read Round the Twist fics and haven't seen it since I wayway younger, and to be honest I dunno which episode you're talking about, however this is a unique writing style is cool.

PS: Roche says 'Woah'. Thatis a good thing.

wow! i really liked that! It's interesting how you did it.

though that whole story freaks me out in general lol...

fox speak very clever. Been ages since I read Paul Jennings but can still remember some of it. You did great. Love the short sentences.