Hi. I love this story. There's something that's been bugging me, though. Since I'm basically a grammar freak, I noticed that sometimes you put two words as one. Like the words 'of course'. Anyway, I love your story so much so far! Elliot/Ryou Shirogane is my favorite character in mew Mew Power/Tokyo Mew Mew. He's awesome! I just wish Zoe/Ichigo didn't love Mark/Aoyama Masaya. Ten she could be with him...

I just finished this fanfic. I... I am stunned by the amazing word choice and character voice... It is the best TMM fanfiction I have read. I for one, love the characters Ryou and Ichigo together, and I was happy to see that you used that pair. I have read and reread this many times, and suggested it to my friends. They don't understand why I am in love with Ryou, or plain TMM itself, and they often get annoyed when I wear a bell necklace. =) But, despite what they say, I still love it. They also do get, ...mad... when I reread this story, and sometimes angry for not joining them on their activities and parties. I noticed my friend didn't invite me to her birthday this year. >.< Not that I had time to go... Haha...
Good job, and ~nya!

OMG!! SHE'S HERE!! Ichigo i mean. gawsh ur story's amazzing!! i luve it!

I love all of your fanfiction!! But this one is definately my favourite! Can't wait till you update the sequel!

love icat wait to read seque

"But pink will attract more people. Groups of people will probably come in after school. Who wouldn't want to order some teas and cake from a cute pink cafe?"

"I wouldn't," I said matter-of-factly

YOU WOULD GO WHEN YOUR GIRLFRIEND DRAGS YOU THERE.ANYWAY I LIKE YOUR STORY.PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR SEQUEL:)

this is brilliant i read it all a few days ago while i was supposed to be doing homework
this is by far the best story ive read on here!
i loved the way it was from ryou's pov.
that just made it that extra bit better
this is awesome and so i am also reading the sequel!
RYOUxICHIGO forever!
pheobebabe xox

I really love this story. You're writing style, the plot, its length...Everything was just perfect and I've been sitting here reading it for hours. It drew me in immediately. I love how the story flowed well from one part to another, and how you described Ryou's feelings, and his relationship with Ichigo. I apologize for rambling, but how can I not say my thoughts for such a well written story?

Keep up the good work! I look forward to the sequel!

P.s RYOU X ICHIGO 4 EVER!

I JUST LOVE your story!

Ichigo and Ryou forever! I'm reading the sequel too!

You matched the episodes very well. No spelling or grammar errors I can see. Well done!

Great job! It seems very intresting. The writing is very good.

(Croud Cheering and going crazy) What a fabulous story! Everyone don't you think that was wonderful?!?!?! The best I have read! finally...Ryou and Ichigo together forever as a happy married couple. ^_^

That's it...I've decided...this has got to be my favorite fanfic of all time! It is so well written and it flows so good! I love every single sentence and I really cant wait to read the rest, but sadly, I have got to do my homework...I'll continue tomorrow though!

I love green day

I really liked this chapter! Loved the sadness and that Ryou finally releaved himself of the pain that caused him so much agony. I truly can't wait to read the rest and I heard that you are writing a sequel. I look foward to it!