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| Chakra 2008-01-03 ch 4, anon. | abusemake more. plz... |
| Ireland Raine 2006-02-12 ch 4,  | abuseReally good fic you have here. ^^ I'm glad I found it cause I was in need of a laugh. Heheh. I thought you should know that Shantotto speaks in rhyme though. I didn't notice it for the longst time, but she really does. I see a lot of her and Ajido since I'm a Windurstian. ^^ |
| Spanner 2005-04-21 ch 4, | abuseYou've done a great job of combining humor and drama in this fanfiction. The splashes we see of adventurers' lives do a great deal to help the reader who is also a player feel more at home in envisioning the story you're creating. I love your characterizations of the races, too - especially the idea of young Mithra being naive, and Tarutaru being promiscuous. Now there's a reversal. ^_^ Anyway, I hope you keep writing this! |
| Yuki Tsukihana 2005-04-06 ch 4, | abuse:O woo! coming-of-age ceremony! ^^ I'm a Mithra myself in the game, and I've always wanted to know more about "my race" since I've been playing. Mithras are really fun, being an amazon race. it's fun to know people's take on them ^^ and yours is one of the most plausible I've heard yet :D anyways, on to Tarutaru! for that is what this story be about! well...they ARE rodents...makes sense that they would go at it like rabbits |
| Prismatic 2005-04-01 ch 4, | abuseYou know, other than its literary competency, my favorite thing about this fic is that you seem to be leveling at about the same rate as I am (or at least, writing at the rate I'm leveling.) XD I look forward to the next chapter. (I recently raided Castle Oztroja for Magicite, and lemme tell you, that was some . Dammit, Lionx! With all that shiny white gear you'd think you could manage to keep a 41 war alive! /cry *gets pummeled by the angry taru whm* Hee hee, tickles.) |
| Prismatic 2005-03-21 ch 3, | abuseYou rock me. Really hard. Not as hard as Patt-Pott, though. |
| Yunni 2005-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeh, this is Yunni - very nicely written, we ^^ |
| lawngnomesorceress 2005-03-10 ch 3, | abuseYay, new update! And I always -did- wonder how that poor taru got along in Bastok.. ehehe. Do keep writing! |
| Charles Williams 2005-02-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love you tale of court intrigue and hot,secret trysts.I have always loved the Tarutaru and your story elevates them to new heights.Now we can see them as flawed,living and loving people,as hot-blooded and as emotionally powerful as they are amiable. Kudos to you,Catwho,and may we see more of this riveting and exciting tale! |
| Chang Kuei 2005-01-31 ch 3, | abuseum... hehe =p i like your story^^ Its funny =) keep it going plz |
| Prismatic 2005-01-10 ch 1, | abuse*falls off chair laughing* Ahahaha! I always wondered about those tarus. Dr. Shantotto is great. *waves Windurst flag* |
| lawngnomesorceress 2005-01-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseHehehe... This is awesome. I love the sex-crazed Taru's in this fic. You must continue! |