You know, i know you wrote this like, forever ago, but, it totally rocked!

Absolutely wonderful. Left me with a grin on my face.

Swet!
I luved it!
Action packed and very well written!
Bravo!

Im still awaiting (a bit impatiently I might add) for the sequel here...

If ever I would Leave you
It wouldnt be in spring time
It wouldnt be in spring when Im entranced by you so

Oh no not in springtimes, summer winter or fall
No Never Would I Leave You at all!

Yeah yeah I know a very brief encapsulation... but its up to you to fill in the other chapters!

Write it soon, I am starving for Sam/Jack fic

Vegas Barbie

OK its been how long since we have had a new story?

come on... Im dyin here for more Jacki W story telling!

As you can see I am back to re-reading the other stuff

vegas barbie

Oh hey! I've read this story before somewhere, and have been looking for it ever since! It was you! lol.

I loved this one the first time I read it, too. Loved all of the steps Sam (and all of her conspirators) took to find Jack and get him back. I enjoyed their confessions to each other about what they'd always imagined their combined children to look like, and Jack having absolutely no qualms about retiring if the trade-off was "Sam and 2.5 Carter-O'Neill's". Love that line :)

All around, a very good fic. I enjoyed it thoroughly, and am glad I got a chance to tell you so, this time!

-sil

That was a really enjoyable read. Keep writing fics!

Clap, clap, clap! Clever to use the lyrics to introduce each chapter!! Spellcheck would be appreciated for a smoother read. Sam is a very strong and determined woman. Lucky Jack! Very romantic!

great story...very original. i loved the fluff...and i hated wilkins, such an areshole...i love having ppl in stories that are just created for you to hate :D

That was wonderful. I was smiling like an idiot at the end!

sequel??

Gr...she let O'Neill go without her? E--no!

Go Harry! He can be such a slacker! On the other hand he does seem to have a handle on all those like himself! LOL

OOh I like this idea! Your muse is working overtime!

Wahoo! Finally fishing! Loved it, great fic!