 Devi11 2005-11-29 . chapter 1(How come I didn't see this fic before?)
Lovely writing! A very peculiar mixture of heartrending and warm-fuzzy light-hearted, but it works.
I love the way you write the Unicronians. Love it.
And yes, (IMHO) it's plausible that Cyclonus (wonderful, ever-loyal Cyclonus) would think and act just the way you described it. |
 indigo-ink, who is just too lazy to sign in. Beat her. 2004-11-19 . chapter 1 Lovely, lovely piece. Never encountered this take on the Unicronians before, very fascinating. Nice contrast between Cyc's unhappy soliloquy and the semi-sweet ending. Me likely muchmuchmuch. MuchmuchmuchMUCHmuchmuch... ;)
Hmm...how long is a cycle? I'd guess a day, but somehow I doubt Galv's ability to last that long on his own.
BTW, there seems to a recurring theme here. Namely, really good last lines. And the one here beats even poor, hungover Megs's "Not Again!". *sniggers, goes to read again* |