Moving, deeply moving.
I love it! I think that these lyrics are GREAT!

YIKES!

Kind of confusing, but that might be me. & that I don't have access to the music probably doesn't help.

It's weird, but interesting. Thought-provoking.

Keep writing! :)

OK, I would have to say that this is probably the most original piece I have seen here on I sat here with my headphones on, listening to "Across the Stars" while reading your lyrics...and tears started to form!

You have captured the very essence's of Anakin's and Padme's love within this piece, as well as Anakins near-obsession with Padme and his fall to the Dark Side. The way you arranged your lyrics within the various bridges of the music were absolutely astounding! Bravo!

Are you a music major? If not, you should think about songwriting for a living!

Ivy

One word: beautiful.