ACK! Man, you really had me hanging there for a moment. I thought it would be a sad ending! But you came through and made me sigh in happy relief. Mimoe forever, ne? One thing you should look out for though is spelling errors, like "dose" for "does" and "your" for "you're". No offense meant, honest. I look forward to your other works.

Jyoumi!

(May they multiply)

Poor Jyou, getting fooled like that.

But it's really like him to come back and ask for Mimi's hand!

That rocked!I'm so sick of mimatos,mishiros,and michis!JYOUMI you write another one.

oh my god! that was so sweet! nicely written too! i love jyoumi's! keep up the good work! _ from Luna a.k.a. anime girl

Ooh that was soooooo krewl! Squeal worthy! *squeals* I love Jyoumi! Write more!

So what do you think?