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Ceire
2005-01-05 . chapter 1
I had to check if you'd written anything else after reading your other fic, and I'm glad I did. I love these brief vignettes you use to sketch out a character... You made me feel sympathetic towards Draco, and I'm not one of his screaming fans.

I really enjoyed this, but being a pedantic English student I just want to slip in that you might want to check some of your tenses. :) Good writing, keep it up!
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