DOUG DIMMADOME!! OWNER OF THE DIMMSDALE DIMMADOME!! I have a question...*shuffles feet*...please tell me that this is not going to be yaoi...PLEASE! Oh and the brain and the drink and the...are you purposely TRYING to make me barf on my keyboard and ruin it? I swear, I think my computer has been infested with virtual crack. This morning, I spilled milk on my keyboard and was still in a good mood and then I was all pissy and it was like I was on a low...not that I would know how a low feels...heh heh. REALLY!! I DONT! Read 'Lost Within' in Yu Yu Hakusho. You would really like the main character. She's really kewl. Like, me and you cool. Like, eccentric and dark and twisted and...just read it and humor me. You'll like it.

This is spiffy cool. If I'm sick as a dog and this can make me smile then you know it has to be really good. I like this idea of Vash and Lagato friends...Legato is pretty...really pretty...anyway, write more of this. ya...advil...viccs...niquill...yum...write more please...

Yay, I was in the REVIEW CORNER. Should I perhaps bow to it?

Very interesting, though, I'm slightly sorry to see the hat go. This story is just wonderfully written, I must say. Your writing prowess is fabulous, and it really leaves a mental impression. I hope to see more from you soon!

~K. Youko

(And no, I just reviewed two separate chapters at the same time)

Must. Go. Ralph. Now. That was disgusting. Where in the name of all things holy do these works of philisophical yet so disgusting in every way, worls of art come from in the brain of yours. Do I even want to know? No, no i don't. SO DO NOT answer. Anyway, see ya!

I must say, your descriptions are fabulously vivid. As I read this chapter, I could picture everything perfectly in my mind, and your characterization of Legato was flawless. You're a great writer, with an excellent style! Keep it up, and I can't wait for your next chapter!

~K. Youko

I simply adore how you wrote this. I loved the Legato point of view section - extremely well written, and very in character. Wonderfully character analysis, and for this, it's going on my favourites, and I'll have your stuff on my alerts.

Keep writing!

~K. Youko

Nice. But adolescent generally refers to the time around a person's teenage years. It sounded like you were refering to Lagato's childhood. Other than that, it's great. I like your style. The way you portray life-after-death is intriguing.

-K

m...cookies. Yay! Anyway, keep it up and if it dies...you do!! KUKUKUKUKUKUKUKUKUKU! So, gonna be any romance (NO SHOUNEN AI!! ICKY!!)? Is there? Is there? Lego-sama needs a woman.