The story is great. I think it would be better if you made a side story instead of an intermision. Please write more!!

Phoenix Boepple

That was awesome!! Can't wait till you update again!!

Phoenix Boepple

I really like your story so far, it is funny that you put Pioson Ivy in with the X-men LOL. I am not sure wich way you should write the story, either way is great. ;-p

That really depends on whether you can write Alex's story in a way that correlates with this one. If you hint at them crossing paths later, or sometimes being in the same place without knowing it, that kind of thing, putting it in with the rest should be fine. On the other hand, if they're hugely different stories that will just so happen to join up at a point, it'll kinda suck, and probably not make any sense. No-one likes disjoint narrative.

Great story, anyway. Update soon.

Personally I love the story as it is now. I'm not a fan of Alex. He seems like a dumb surfer dude no offence. If you have to include him DON'T do the intermition in Lost PLEASE! Make it as a side story PLEASE! oh by the way if your going to add some charater maybe I recomend Betsy Berdock(pyblock),the purple haired sexy bombshell and Pyro,the crazy fire obsessed guy. the one I recomendafter them are maybe toad,Raven Darkolme(rouge and kurts mom) and white Queen. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON! Could there be alittle more Lancitty please? Your story is great keep going!

... sure... Add Alex's story in the mix... It's all good...

Peace out

Good chapter once again. Update REALLY SOON! Are they in the future? This seems like it should be rated PG or PG-13 to me. I hope there is more action in the next chapters, and alittle more Lancitty. Pretty good. UPDATE REALLY SOON PLEASE! I REALLY like THIS STORY!

Yeah...HOPE... Nice Tribe name... STILL how the hell did all this happen?? Are the x-men here, or did they die or something... WHO is the white knight? Can't wait for the next update!!

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WOW this is awsome! Love the Lancitty! This has made my favs list!! UPDATE REALLY SOON PLEASE! Remy is evil in this story. Lance is the leader. Cool! Just try to capitalize names more please it can get confusing when there not capitalized. I can't wait for more LANITTY! UPDATE REALLY SOON PLEASE!

WHAT! Is this a future that became messed up thing?!??!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?

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YEAH! I can review! Anywho, I like how you got Peter Parker into this, still so many questions and not many awnsers...

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0.0 What they aren't on Earth, WHAT THE HELL! Where are the others? What's going on?!?! Keeping writting

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Pplease write more
I hate cliff hangers!!
Phoenix Boepple