((sobs uncontrollably for a number of reasons))

The main reason being that you haven't updated in 2 years, and have one chapter to go. What is it with that, huh? lol This is the second fic of yours that I've read and couldn't wait to finish, only to find out that it's not done yet and hasn't been updated in... an eternity. ((sigh))

You are an amazing author, and I'm a fairly tough critic, as it were. You're obviously extremely passionate about the relationship between Joey and Seto, and I would like to happily inform you that you have converted me. I am now very wanting to write my own fic, probably with a Seto/Joey romance-theme. So ya know.

^_^ Please please please update soon?? ((has mastered the pleading puppydog face and flexes its charm)) Please?

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.

Oh my good, I just realised that I reviewed you just once in Chapter 5. I never reallised it. I´m Sorry.
I mean, normally I don´t write Reviews just really rare from time to time and I started after years just because of you Story and it has been special to me since and I allways thaught I had written you tons of Reviews till now.^^°
But I am doing it now.

I Read your Story the first time I think 3 years ago and since then I read it every now and then, I myself don´t know why cause I know whats going to happen till the 9 Chapters, but I do. And every time I love the Story from a new. It´s beautiful written and the idea...the Plot is absolutely heratbrecking. I read the story 6 times till today in those years and every time I had to cry again, cause although I remembered that it was a great and sad Story I forget how emotional you get while reading it.

And I don´t know if I was bored in my last day´s of vacation or if I was in the mood to read somehing sad, but this morning I read it again and I can´t believe that there was so much that I didn´t understand the other times. I mean, English isn´t my native language as you have seen in my poor writing skills righ know ^^° but I understand the story very good, so i Thought. With every Re-Reading I find new things that give it a even deeper reason. Like the Paper cranes for example...

And this was the first time that i heard the songs parallel to reading the Story and it made me cry.
I think I am going to be sad for a while for Joey ^^°

I saw that you just got 44 Reviews and was shocked that there are just so little. and that was the reason for me checking what i myself wrote^^°.
I Think it is a shame that you just got 44. mean, its not abaout how many you got of course, but I think you should have gotten more appriciation ( i think i spelled this wrong ^^°) for it. There are a few goos Story´s out there like "Dragon´s Kiss" wich I like very much to, but that story has Reviews like nothing. You deserved many as well, cause your story is absolutely special in every way.

At leat I want to ask you a question and I hope you will anwer it. ..
Why did you stoped to update, I mean there is one chapter left and I think you must have had your reasons for not updating the last Chapter, and i was curious.
Is there any hope for updating it?

So for now I will stop my talking and want to thank you for your effeorts at this story like I should have done before. I am rally guilty for not doing it before.

I wish you all the best and a good day,
Cel

P.S.: I am story or all my english mistakes ^^°

you just have to update soon!!

i just wanted to say that i absolutely love this fic!! it seems like i've been waiting forever for it to be updated though! do you have any plans to finish it?

hello :) are you planning on updating? your story is one of my very favorites on the whole site! i wanna know what happens next! XD please update if you have time
you are amazing!!

oh my god, I love you for updating! is there really only one more of these left? what's going to happen?!? is everything going to be better now between tristan and jounouchi? keep on writing!

one more chapter left
can't wait for it

hello! wow-- i love this story so much so far! you are doing wonderfully! the story really flows, and it is written creatively and well. also- i like how you develop the relationships between characters over time instead of having them almost instantly change their minds and opinions about each other - it makes it more realistic. anyway, once again, great job! *dances and throws seto plushies at you* you are awesome! ^_^

This is an awesome story. I like the characterizations. I hope you will keep up the good work and update soon.

finally! i love all your fics they always teach a lesson or it is portraying diff. emtions... update soon!

Evanescence is a really good band. Fallen is a really good CD. Hello and Everybody's Fool are really good songs. And so is Imaginary, which is my favorite on the CD.

Lovely chapter. Lovely story. The way you describe things... you really can see it, you know? It... it just reminded me of something which I'd forgotten. Thanks.

-Hikari

That was a dynamic story. There were times when I was sitting here tearing up. This story has so much power and emotion. Fantastic job.

*gapes* Oh my god, you updated! *hugs you to death* Wohoo!! Finally!I have been waiting so long! :D

Only one chapter left? :( Damn it! But that's okay, because I want to know how this will end. You've started to tie all the loose ends, so it is noticeable there is going to be a conclusion soon.

It was nice to have a look into Joey's life through his parents. Though I do think he went a bit too soft on them. Especially the mom! *wants to hit her* Selfish idiot... -_-'

And Seto understands now! :D And Joey is grateful, and maybe he'll start to be on a road to recovery? ^_^ They can live happily ever after in a dysfunctional and complexed relationship (for they both are wonderfully messed up)

Can't wait for the final chapter! Seriously, awesome story! (I thought you were dead you know!) Don't make me go all worried again, ok? ^^

Hi! *waves*
You know, it's been quite a while since you updated *tries to evoke guilt* And I was just wondering if you could pretty please update soon...? *uses the all known puppy eyes*
I mean, I love stories like these that really bring out such realistic actions and reactions to events and such. And I like that the relationships are changed, and that the one between Seto and Joey is slowly growing (because that's how it should be ^_^)
Not to mention that the way you write is awesome! I could only wish to have your talent! *tries to steal it, but fails*

So PLEASE, update this magnificent story!

Awesome story