Aww D: Man, Sasuke better help Naruto

ow ow painful. you just prodded me with needles with that fic. with sasuke unsure of what to do and hiding the results from naruto and pfah. just pfah. it made me want to cuddle sasuke. and then cuddle naruto, because he can't help it either.

This is a great story and can't wiat for more!

wow that was great!! i love how u made sasuke so hesitant to help naruto but yet u made his love for him always win. it was very good i didnt see any grammar errors or anything bad about. now u actually made me think if sasukes arm is actually ruined because of the fight him and naruto had at the valley of the end. wow this is a long review well keep up the good work!!

This is so painful to read, but you handled it perfectly. Sad.

are you going to continue this or is it done?

I really like this story. The drama was pretty well writting.

Awwe...that was so adorable..

Very interesting :)

Very Good

That was a great piece.

wow, REALLY good. and kind of tragic, thinking of how the basically their future together is doomed because of the kyuubi. i can totally see this happening in the manga...damn kishimoto is gonna finish it off with angst and naruto dying, i can just see it now...T_T

but yeah, love how sasuke was standing there, considering, and then he just acted normal and woke up naruto and stuff...like, yeah...good one.

great work.

T-T That's sad! But at lest no one died!

Oh, that was beautiful.

You encorporated EVERYTHING, and that's what really makes me happy. They're both perfectly in character, the setting is wonderfully plausible and the narrative is excellent and witty and both funny and sad at all the right times, in all the right places. You have so much to be proud of.

I wonder if it will ever really happen - at first I wondered about the multiplying scars, but then I imagined them as you descirbe, small and numerous and crowded together, and I got it and it felt perfectly natural. I wonder about the biting; I wonder how bad it would get before they would dub his execution necessary.

The description of the chidori-mishap was excellent. Again, at first it seemed odd and out of place, but when you explained it seemed to turn other theories on their heads. You've morphed a universe with this one, in a way that you could completely gloss over and miss, never knowing the difference between the fic and the basis of it.

It's EXCELLENT.

You have so much to be proud of.

Don't EVER stop writing like this. Ever.

Story like this is what make you think that the author was reading too many wolfman and frakenstien stories.

It was quality reading though.
But it's kind of depressing to see almost ALL of the fics were this dark.

Man, your Naruto world sure is dark.