Heh, one on Malik!! Right on.

This was the most honest one yet of all the Malik's POV I have read. Though Spyderweb does a great Malik as well.

I imagine he would be afraid of his dark, and even a bit relieved by it. It did protect him when he got his markings. Imagine someone carving into your back with a fire heated knife.

Yami Malik is a psychotic creature bent on death. He should be afraid. LOL

*wibble* This is so sad, but interesting! I had yet to read a Malik-centered piece, and this provided me with a lot of insight about the character, not to mention made my little heart ache. I really don't know enough about poor Malik, though I do have a soft spot for him. Thanks for the great read!

I really liked this a lot. I thought that in particular the snippets of conversation were a very chilling illustration of just what you were saying throughout the rest of the story. Great job! ^^

Whoa, that was awesome. I like the way he says "Hikari-mine". I've never seen that before. The yami actually kinda reminds me of Gollum from Lord of the Rings. Very, very, very good.

Very angst. But good.

I shall review! And now i am!!...

Dragon: I like evil...

Wolf: I feel so bad for the poor boy...

Dragon: poor boy? I thought you hated Malik?

Well I think-

Dragon: I don't care what you think, this is my story to review now. I like the detail and how you have his feeling over the edge to where you and he can't describe it...it really gives the story a way to keep going.

So keep up the good work and I might read more stuff now...^_^

Facinationg. I liked that, it had a nice flow, and an interesting theme. Great job!

*sqee* I love Malik and now I get to see into his head! *heartbreaks*

It's so chilling because it's true. Marik IS a part of Malik, might even be him now and Malik's just the small shred of sanity left. I can really feel his pain and struggle against himself, and the dialogue seem real too.

*shivers* I can feel the evilness under Marik's words, and it's just so HIM it's scary.

But maybe it's because of my lack of sleep, but the writing doesn't seem as concise as it usually with your one-shot/ficlet things. It seems just a LITTLE drawn out, but that's the only way to add in the third conversation to get that nice ending. *shrug* I'm probably seeing things.

*too speechless to say anything* omr... that was so.. AMAZING! i felt like.. it was so true and.. just... wow... im so amazed with ur work! *hugglez* it was just so realistic... ^^ keep it up, krs??

Nicely done! I love it.

hehe thats good really good ^_^

ja!
JAMO ^_^

Me love it...*eyes big* yet its sad...*smiles* great job!