Helo :D

I absoloutly adore this story, and the ending in chapter 6 is a cliff-hanger that just kills me XD Lol. Riku and CLoud? Kissing? Poor Leon and Sora. Hope Riku confused CLoud with Sora. SoOmehow... 0.o
Lol ;p

And now, the question u know am gonna ask (lol). Wen is this story gnna get updated? Anytime soon soon? *cross ma fingers*

It's been so long, but I promise u, us readers hav seriously not forgottn this wicked story. Please update soon :)
It has been on ma mind ever since June/July 08 wen I first read it as to why Riku kissed Cloud. Like, Why?! WHy not SORA?!
LOL XD

HOpe this won't get put on hold for the next...10 years or sometihng >.<
Hehe!

I LUURVE THIS FIC! :D

AH
This story is win!
I really want to read more! :33

...PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!I DONT KNOW HOW LONG IVE BEEN WAITING FOR IT!PLEASE!...and thank you...

ok now THAT is a good story and is extremly addictive to read.

i love everytihng about the story but i regret reading it? not cos it not good (cos its amazing) but cos the last time this was updated was in feb 2006, around 28 months, around two years i guess? yh around two years. that means that there is no possibility of it being updated anytime soon...so please can u tell me if this will be updated or not, and if it is, then when cos its just..u can't leave this story with such a scary cliff-hanger! its murder to us..murder i TELL U ^.^!

hehehehehe, what i mean (ehm) is that it's just too good of a story and has great potenital and with a great writer like u, i only know that this story will get better...better than it already is (which is like 100 out of 10. lol)

so yh..hope this story has not been forgotten and will be continued...best of luck anyways in whateva u write.. ^.^

Wow. Just wow. Not just for this chapter, but for the whole fic. So after devouring this (almost quiet literally) in about two days (would have been less if not for pesky things like sleep) I have come to the conclusion that you are amazing for various reasons.
However, to save time and space I won't list them (though I certainly can if need be.)

One thing I find quiet interesting about this fic is your characterization of Sora- or more importantly his past. Or should I say, lack there of for the info to the readers part. Nah, scratch that it's not just Sora's characterization that is amazing, it's everyone. I love all the little quirks you gave everyone (ex: could vs the cereal) and it helps just add more life to the story.

One thing I thought was really odd (in a pleasant sort of way) was how you kept referring to Riku as some sort of drug/ having a drug effect. I thought it was an interesting way to put it, and really most fitting.

So, my poor heart sees that this fic hasn't been updated since '06. That being said, usually the chances for the next chapter are slim to non. However, I happen you notice on your user info page about "coming soon". So ever the optimist, with that knowledge I will faithfully put this fic under my watch list.

Thank you for a delightful (heck, 'delightful' doesn't even cut it) fic, and I will look forward to the possibility of a future chapter.

DDR is soo fun. I love this story, Cloud, Leon and Sora..and Cid all working at a conveinent store soo cool, I was soo surprised when Cloud was dancing with Leon and I thought it was smexy, also i like how they couldn't get the ice machine working until Riku, I love that Zak was in the fic too.! so please keep writing!!

urgh no it was getting so good

It's good, but I like the other one, Wholly Addicted, better. I'm not saying this one's bad (hell no, it's great!).

I'm lovin' it! (badabapada...) Oh no that was a Macdonalds reference. What have I sunk to?
Anyhow, great fic. The cereal boxes! Ohmygoodness, that cracks me up.

You, FruchiSeka, are a cruel and evil person to leave us all hanging here for so long, teetering on such a razor-sharp edge, with one foot clinging desperately to its precarious purchase and the other suspended in mid-air, arms wildly flailing. Not to mention poor Sora and Leon, frozen for two long years in such a heart-wrenching moment of time, with mouths forever agape.

To make matters worse, I noticed it had been quite a long time since you updated anything, and I admit; I was on the verge of despair. I was on my way to the closet, trudging along with leaden feet, to pick out something suitably funereal as I prepared to mourn the loss of my dearly beloved friend, Serendipity, when I decided to stop one more time by your profile to pay my respects. Imagine my delight when I found that not only had you just completed Wholly Addicted, there was also the promise of a forthcoming chapter of Serendipity. Oh happy day!

Hence the review. I decided that it really wasn't fair of me to yell at you for not updating when I have never even taken the time to tell you how much I love your story. For I do, you know, truly and with all my heart.

Your Leon is so perfectly, tantalizingly Leon, and your I'm-too-sexy-for-my-pants Cloud makes me giggle like an idiot. Although one could possibly argue that Leon would never be caught dead playing DDR, we all know that Leon could never say no to a challenge. He's a lot like Marty McFly: you can make him do just about anything as long as you push the right button. And boy, is Cloud ever good at pushing those buttons. I just hope that last button he pushed doesn't cause Leon to self-destruct.

I'm sure Cloud had his reasons – making Leon jealous seems the obvious one, and I certainly hope it works because seriously, somebody needs to smack that dense boy upside the head. He wants Cloud so badly; you know it; I know it; Cloud knows it. Everybody knows it but Leon.

Or perhaps Cloud isn't as confident as he pretends? Perhaps he was trying to reassure himself that he is, indeed, the most desirable thing since, well, since Leon. But whatever Cloud's motivation, why Riku? How could he do such a thing to dear Sora. And what, pray tell, was Riku's reason for reciprocating?

Hopefully we'll find out in the next chapter, and I simply can't wait, though I will – for as long as it takes and as patiently as possible – but please, I beg of thee, don't make your adoring fan (you know I was just kidding about the cruel and evil comment, right?) wait too terribly much longer. The suspense is killing me.

"F**k, think of something ugly... Think of ugly… Don’t get turned on… ugly… ugh…CID. Bikini! Phil! ...hobo’s?

So I’ve got Cid and Phil in bikini’s talking with a hobo? No... Better make that shagging. Yeah, hot sweaty threesome between them.

Holy f**k, I think I can feel the bile rising in my gut."
(i laughed off that part for like a whole ten minutes!)

XD the way you write sora's personality is so funny! he seems like such a pervert at times when it comes to riku, leon, and cloud. but in some situations i can totally relate to him, thus understanding him, and therefor laughing at how he handles it.

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(-_-) i really hope you plan on updating sometime soon.

another great fic. lols cloud got rejected. nice angst too, angst is good ^_^ ah cloud was a bastard in the last chap, poor sora. well, just wondering if you're still continuing this, since i noticed it's been like 2 years since an update.

gah! Speechles once again blame my fondness for club scenes did i say fondness no i said continue with the good work ^-^

Beautiful Story so far! But sadly it hasn't been updated for two years. Do you plan to continue or is this another cliff hanger that we will be left hanging on?

GASPAGE.
Uhh... this is too awesome for words. And at 7:30 in the morning with zero sleep? I'm not even going to try and be articulate. xD
But, here goes anyway? oo;
Bad Cloudy. Bad. *waggles finger at* You're supposed to molest Leon, not Riku, stupid head! *flails*
Though, I mean, I guess you have the excuse of being wasted. Still, why isn't Riku protesting, hm? ¬¬
My thoughts on this are... well, um, WOW. It's amazing. I really adore your style of writing in this fic, it keeps it fun, but you can still clearly tell when it's serious. Bleh. You'll have to wait until I've had sleep before I can give you a good review. Eh-heh. Sorry. ^^'
Eh. 'nyway, just thought I'd say great job, and ask you to update when you have the time or something? =)

~Hugs and candy kisses,
Cookies of Lust