dont worry about ti, i dont think its getting ooc, it seems really good so far, dont discontinue it pleze, like i did mine, its really really good, so make sure ya continue! here i will even help you out with the writers block.

okay you could have cruxis end up telling kratos to hold raine captive longer because she now knows about what he is trying to do, he likes that thought... anyway, they send someone else to guid the chosen, genis and Lloyd search for raine and could meet up with tem later kay?

meanwhile, raine as to put up with the mercinary's attitude and starts to... like it or something romantical like that, but you can do what you want, i'm suggesting stuff just to help with writers block... i should start suggesting suggestions in MY fanfics... excuse me while i do that...

i_i ah... short... yeah keep up good work, i'll... log in next time... yeah! continue!

when are you going to finish this story?
I would really like to read this story. they are my favorite pair.

when are you going to finish this story?
I would really like to read this story. they are my favorite pair.

when are you going to finish this story?

kratos doesn't have fellings. but still it's good. good jod and one more thing PLEASE UPDATE IT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

This is becoming a very interesting story, please update it as quickly as posible. I'll be waiting::pulls out PSP and waits::

Ah.. ha! This IS interesting! n-n nya, I likes this, a lot!! Update, soon? And, um. Raine seemed in character.. She did.. I swear.. ah, and um. Isn't it " Colette " ? .. Not sure.. well, um. Keep up the good work! ~ Professor Sage

Ah, this should be rather interesting.. n-n keep up the good work! ~ Professor Sage

what if raine tried to escape again to try to warn collette. but during the way kratos stop her and relized that she was the one who could destroy him and what i mean destroy him is that she could change his way. making him fall in love with her. plus i think that raine seems in character. she was standing up for her self. i just wish that she would you know start fighting back proving that she is strong.

Pretty cool. i wish i could find some thing i dont like but i cant!

Summary:Kratos thought he had finally molded himself into the perfect Cruxis Angel, emotionless and unfeeling. Against his will, one person stepped into his life and shattered all control he had.Me: GO RAINE!

Hey you now what Raine doesn't have blonde hair she has SILVER will any way good story so far I cna't wait to read the next chapter so you had be better finish it quikly of else !
SEE YA
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Great chapter! Update soon! ^_^

Will you please keep this story? I really love how it's going so far... Keep up the good work; I look forward to seeing more of it!