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| Penguin Fart 2005-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseOh. My. Gosh. You must be an amazing person to have written this. It's so powerful, I can feel Vegeta's love and pain! This is one of the few fics I've read that actually bring credibility to Vegeta's former love life. It's great. P.S. Thanks for proofreading! It's nice to know someone can spell. |
| Vekura 2003-03-19 ch 1, | abusebeautiful just beautiful a tear ran down my face as i was reading it. it was very well written and you should be rewarded for that... |
| Velasa 2002-04-24 ch 1, | abuse*** her head to the side, sadly* that, was very well done... I knew when I read the title that it would be interesting (I don't usually read Veg fics), but that was an understatement.... AU, but there's no problem eith that. *grinz* The emmotions were very real, the ending line was amazing, my only problem is I wish it'd been longer with the scene around the garden.... *smiles softly* |
| Songbreeze and WiccaGurl 2000-11-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad, but it was rell good. |
| Dragon Queen 2000-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank you! Finally, a good Vegeta romance that doesn't have Bulma in it! Your fic's great! Write some more! |
| Rinoachuu 2000-05-13 ch 1, | abusehey, that was good. I felt that too. Maybe Vegita saw some of Neheria in Buluma and thats how Trunks came to be!!^_^ |
| Neo 2000-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abusevery touching. . . |
| Nanaki 2000-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abusePretty good, but Planet Vegeta was destroyed when Prince Vegeta was only about six years old, and King Vegeta was killed on board Frieza's ship. As an alternate universe fic though, this works great. |
| Saiyajin Horse 2000-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseMan. What a real tear-jerker ::sniff, sniff:: I needed a kleenex for that ending. But it was really sweet. It would be nice if there were to be a sequal, but this story is fine as a one-shot. |
| mel 2000-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat fic! But Vegeta isn't mean.. he's just misunderstood... yeah that's it. |
| Penny 2000-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeatuiful story. Very well written. I commend you. |
| IceJin 2000-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sniff* That was so good! Please write more! OMG I loved that story! |
| Ruka 2000-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was very touching....except....you do realize Vegeta gets wished back and hooks up with Bulma right? |
| Larania 2000-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was interesting, and a good reason for why Vegita was such a little nincompoop. |