Omg!! I love this story!! =D I couldn't move away from it and had to read it from start to finnish in one go! Pity I couldn't have discovered it sooner XD *Goes to read the next one*

your fanfiction is one of the best ive read so far

Hi, I really liked your story. It's awesome - you're a great writer. :)

I enjoyed this so much! I love your writing...it grabs the readers attention and pulls them into the story; the cliff-hangers were well done and left me hanging on the edge of my seat. Well done!

Love this story :) You have a beautiful writing style, and I see you've done a lot of research as well. The background info on Cappadocia and the use of a few Turkish phrases (not that I speak the language, but still :)) makes the story feel more authentic. As for the swearing, perhaps Lara didn't swear in any of the games (they're all 12+ rated, so how could she? :)), but I think it fits the situations and that replacing it with euphemisms would ruin the effect.

Will read the sequel next. Looking forward to seeing more of the Nephilim :)

wow, I just read through that whole fic in a matter of about 2 hours and I loved every minute of it. You have a really great style of writing that kept me hanging at the end of each chapter and not minding it lol. I suppose I really have to read that sequel now!

Naughty, naughty... if you're going to put the "F" word in there, at least type it as "f--k" like I do. I mean, that kind of ruined the whole thing for me. And it sounded interesting, too!

P.S. Lara has NEVER cussed like that in any game OR movie! Come on!

hi OMG ive just finished reading your story and it is REALLY good i hope to be reading and enjoying the sequel soon!

I have finished reading your story and I just love it!! It's so well written, the plot is great. I would love to see "Slouching Toward Bethlehem: The Movie" with a hot actor playing your wonderful Kurtis (who I fell in love with, I must say :P) I'm definitly going to read the sequel of this great story you've wirtten. Congratulations for such an amazing fic!

Mane

This is such a great story. I just printed it because I can't stand reading in front of the computer.
I love the way you write, your style, the story is very deep and well written. I wish I had reviewed earlier because I think it's too late now.

*is loving your story*

I'm only on chp. 10 so far.. but i REALLY love tis story. Well descripted.. keep at it =)

I LOVE this story.. i havent been reading it long.. but it so awesome =)

*I just lived out the american dream, I killed my boss* Wow. I loved that!
Anyway, I was right. I was glued to this story for a couple of days, and enjoyed it very, very much. Thanks for this story, it was wonderful.
Oh, and I found out that you didn't know the title was from Second coming when you chose the title, but isn't it amazing how your story relates to it? Hope you have read it by now!:D

...and what rough beast, its hour come round at last... Hum. Yeats? took me a long time to remember who the author of that line "slouching towards..." was. Anyway, I've just started reading this, and it's wonderful. I think I'm going to enjoy some very pleasurable hours reading this fic, as you obviously know what you're doing. Great, great title.

I really liked your story, especially with the finding and realationship with Kurtis. I always thought they would get steamy together... lol

Thanks for entertaining a bored Tombraider fan!