Okay... seriously... Virginia and SHANE? Jet, probably, Gallows, probably not, Shane(? O__O ?), never.(and I don't care how clichéd "poor Jet" becomes, you were still too ** him[not because he didn't get Virginia, so get the thought that I'm a crazy SoB out of your head{even though I probably am}])

Heheh. meteor9's review was funny--but right! POOR everyone! And most especially poor JET! Aw... I'm a sucker for angsty stuff nowadays... but nevertheless, I still love the way you write, Skylark! Simply amazing! ^.^ Hope you continue soon!

This may be a long list, so I'll get right into it. ^_^:

Aww, poor Clive. Snipers kinda need their hands to work properly. Plus, I can already see that it's not the only thing he's struggling with. Well, so I already know what I'm inferring, but yeah, anywho:

Aww, poor Beren. It's bad enough for myself that I can imagine music, but not make, it, but for him it's ten times worse. He had it, then he lost it.

Aww...poor Nat. He doesn't get to hang out with our favorite drunkard! ^_^

Aww...poor Julian. And I actually remember him from before. Imagine that! I remembered something!

Aww, poor Jet. But, all anyone does is say 'poor Jet' these days. So therefore I shall laugh at him instead. "Heh heh, you're alone. Hee hee hee!" ^_^

And finally, poor Shane. He's got an uptight Virginia for the rest of his life. ^_^

Okay, that's enough out of me. Excellent work, as usual. Keep it up!

Hey, you posted! And I like it very much so far. ^_^ You've gone in a ways and introduced the characters, you screwed Beren's life up perfectly, and Jet is in hermitage! Oh, and Virginia's gone psycho. Hee hee. Poor Julian, I hope they figure out what's wrong with him soon. And that last scene with Jet just made me laugh. He missed the last train to Ginnyville, he did. Does he dislike Shane now, or is he more upset with himself? I wonder who Jet will love now?

Annette: *Waves to Beren* ^_^

BW0: *Waves to the tree that Julian was looking at* ^_^