This is so beautiful and sad.

Poor Ranma, poor Akane. I love the final line though: it gives a sense of hope. I'm upset with myself for not having found it earlier... I would have definitely encouraged you to continue on. It's a very touching concept.

Either way, terrific job. _

Double damn! Sad and melancholic, but all the more beautiful for that. Great work.

aww I love Ranma. This was pretty sad but the ending seemed to bring some sort of comforting closure.

Mirai

This is a very nicely done short. I enjoyed it.

Very nice even though it's extremely sad. I think it stands better on its own, I don't think you can improve on what you have written here and you may dilute the feelings that this chapter inspires. Super work.

Wow...this was really good. You didn't give to much away in the beginning...actually got me a bit confused as to whom the character was. Then towards the end I got a little sniffly _ So, great job keep it up Hououza.

Himitsu

I've read this before and I really like it. I wonder, if you made it into more than a one-shot, what the plot would be. In any case, please continue, your writing is quite entertaining and there is no substitute for that!

Tiney

wow, i really liked this i haven't read a fanfic like this. It was really well written.

Very well written! A true example of what Ranma and Akane's future may be like!

Hii, It's me! Since you reviewed for my story, I thought I'd take a look at some of your stories. This is really good! I think you should definitely continue!

:) Hope so!

A full circle, a circle of pain. But, a circle none the less. Very touching bud, keep it up.

Definitely a story you would write.

dennisud