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encarna
2007-11-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseDouble damn! Sad and melancholic, but all the more beautiful for that. Great work.
mirai3k
2006-01-27
ch 1,
abuseaww I love Ranma. This was pretty sad but the ending seemed to bring some sort of comforting closure.
~Mirai
Shark8
2005-11-12
ch 1,
abuseThis is a very nicely done short. I enjoyed it.
jennyjennai
2005-04-12
ch 1,
abuseVery nice even though it's extremely sad. I think it stands better on its own, I don't think you can improve on what you have written here and you may dilute the feelings that this chapter inspires. Super work.
Ikioi Tiernay
2005-02-26
ch 1,
abuseWow...this was really good. You didn't give to much away in the beginning...actually got me a bit confused as to whom the character was. Then towards the end I got a little sniffly ^_^ So, great job keep it up Hououza.

Himitsu
panda-tiney
2005-02-15
ch 1,
abuseI've read this before and I really like it. I wonder, if you made it into more than a one-shot, what the plot would be. In any case, please continue, your writing is quite entertaining and there is no substitute for that!
Tiney
forge
2004-11-19
ch 1, anon.
abusewow, i really liked this i haven't read a fanfic like this. It was really well written.
AnnechanB
2004-11-19
ch 1,
abuseVery well written! A true example of what Ranma and Akane's future may be like!
WornOutDancingShoes
2004-11-19
ch 1,
abuseHii, It's me! Since you reviewed for my story, I thought I'd take a look at some of your stories. This is really good! I think you should definitely continue!!

:) Hope so!
old fool
2004-11-19
ch 1,
abuseA full circle, a circle of pain. But, a circle none the less. Very touching bud, keep it up.
dennisud2015
2004-11-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseDefinitely a story you would write.

dennisud
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