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| encarna 2007-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseDouble damn! Sad and melancholic, but all the more beautiful for that. Great work. |
| mirai3k 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abuseaww I love Ranma. This was pretty sad but the ending seemed to bring some sort of comforting closure. ~Mirai |
| Shark8 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very nicely done short. I enjoyed it. |
| jennyjennai 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice even though it's extremely sad. I think it stands better on its own, I don't think you can improve on what you have written here and you may dilute the feelings that this chapter inspires. Super work. |
| Ikioi Tiernay 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWow...this was really good. You didn't give to much away in the beginning...actually got me a bit confused as to whom the character was. Then towards the end I got a little sniffly ^_^ So, great job keep it up Hououza. Himitsu |
| panda-tiney 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI've read this before and I really like it. I wonder, if you made it into more than a one-shot, what the plot would be. In any case, please continue, your writing is quite entertaining and there is no substitute for that! Tiney |
| forge 2004-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, i really liked this i haven't read a fanfic like this. It was really well written. |
| AnnechanB 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseVery well written! A true example of what Ranma and Akane's future may be like! |
| WornOutDancingShoes 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseHii, It's me! Since you reviewed for my story, I thought I'd take a look at some of your stories. This is really good! I think you should definitely continue!! :) Hope so! |
| old fool 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseA full circle, a circle of pain. But, a circle none the less. Very touching bud, keep it up. |
| dennisud2015 2004-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseDefinitely a story you would write. dennisud |