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Reviews For: It Was You
KatBlue 2005-11-02 . chapter 1
That was so sweet. I loved it. Yeah Xander and Buffy. Check out my Xander and Buffy stories. Very fluffy but action packed oreinted. LOL.
crazytook 2005-10-22 . chapter 1
oh wonderful! short and sweet. it was so cute! kudos!
-crazytook
MBB 2004-11-28 . chapter 1
not sure what to say, I;m not very good ar reviewing.
But as it's B/X, I like it. And it does not marginalise other relations or chance the characters so that's a big plus, too. :-)

But your final statements from Buffy are confusing, as you have her first say she never romantically loved him, and then state that she believes her love for him isthe same as his for her (which is the romantic type)

And then have her say she really loves him (for sure), while at the same time have her thinking that they'll try it out and see if feelings devellop.

I think that, while both times both statements could be true for Buffy, they way you wrote them down they are contradicting each other.

Still, overall it makes a complete story. :-)
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