MBB 2004-11-28 . chapter 1not sure what to say, I;m not very good ar reviewing.
But as it's B/X, I like it. And it does not marginalise other relations or chance the characters so that's a big plus, too. :-)
But your final statements from Buffy are confusing, as you have her first say she never romantically loved him, and then state that she believes her love for him isthe same as his for her (which is the romantic type)
And then have her say she really loves him (for sure), while at the same time have her thinking that they'll try it out and see if feelings devellop.
I think that, while both times both statements could be true for Buffy, they way you wrote them down they are contradicting each other.
Still, overall it makes a complete story. :-) |