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vicky
2006-04-08 . chapter 4
This is great. Please continue, it's just getting really interesting.
Digi-nut
2006-02-26 . chapter 3
Good so far pleaz continue.
Kei Mav
2005-06-23 . chapter 2
Come on! Please continue "United We Stand"! Maybe Takato agrees to work for the D-Reaper and with blackguilmon and biomerges with him to become DarkGallantmon and gets his memories erased by the D-Reaper and with some "nice" Rukato moments Rika helps him get his memories back! Just an idea but please continue!
Kari
2005-03-04 . chapter 1
Very cool. I can't tell you how many times I've heard that :).
the blank pen
2004-11-19 . chapter 1
Eh, it's terribly short. Even if all you wanted to do was establish character relationships and personalities, you could've given some more meat to the chapter.

The concept isn't particularly compelling. Try to give your audience more than a couple of teenagers that like, or don't like a televison show. I'm sure the story can develop nicely given some more attention to detail, and some more depth. Keep writing, good luck.
Ruki and Tremors
2004-11-19 . chapter 1
That was way too short for me to have any idea what I think of this fic.
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